18 May 2025, 04:52
English errors and spelling mistakes
Water-Heating Spell (Aqua Fervens) YR3
A charm that was used to instantly heat water should be present tense

Hot-Air Charm (Aer Calidus) YR3
This air in turn could quickly dry off soaked garments.
should say This air in turn can quickly dry off soaked garments.

Hair Color-Changing Charm (Crinus Muto) YR3
same as above, could should say can.

Bounty given - Lear

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18 May 2025, 05:02
English errors and spelling mistakes
YEAR SEVEN SPELLS
(updating this for ease as i work through the y7 spells)


Reverte Spell - is missing the word Spell within the name. (ref. spell list)
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Partis Temporus - Should be A charm that creates a gap wherever the caster points their wand. This spell was effective in producing a magical partition in a Firestorm.*
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Table Trouble & Vanishing Spell - Capitalizes the word Transfiguration where the other instances of transfiguration are lowercase.

Cat to Tea Cosy - Missing (A) T(t)ransfiguration spell (that can) could be used to transform a cat or kneazle into a tea cosy.

Piertotum Locomoto - A charm (that can)used to bring life to artifacts that ha(ve)d previously been inanimate and unmoving. The target's movements (can) could be controlled by the caster of the charm.

Oppungo Jinx - A jinx that directs an object or individual to attack the victim. This spell (causes) would cause conjured creatures or other movable objects to attack an target.

Human Presence Revealing Spell - This spell on the Spell List isn't in the seventh year store.

Blocked Barrier - A charm that (can) could be used to seal magical barriers and portals to limit access to magical locations.

Gytrash-conjuring Spell - (A) (d)Dark charm that conjures green, transparent Gytrashes through green bolts of light that could be vanquished with the Wand-Lighting Charm.

Repelling Spell - You have two within the shop.
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(A) (s)Spell that keeps something away from the caster or from a target object that the spell is cast upon.

Bounty given - Lear


LACHLAN C. | HARLAN M.

18 May 2025, 07:26
English errors and spelling mistakes
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Found in Fifth Year OWLs shop. Perhaps this is meant to be different than Alarte Ascendare, also touted as the Ascension charm. There have been a lot of changes lately, so I might have missed that one. But this one says the "caster" is lifted rather than the target. With Alarte Ascendare, the target could also be the caster. Is the caster supposed to be the only target here? If not, should be corrected.

According to the wiki and the lore pages Link, this spell only targets the caster. - Lear

18 May 2025, 09:35
English errors and spelling mistakes
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Should read...." the counter-jinx to this jinx is Liberacorpus.

Also, one ankle would indeed leave one dangling, but if the intent is to have targets hoisted into the air by both (and I don't know that it is), it should be changed to ankles.

No clue if it is one or two ankles since I pulled it from the wiki. But I changed the statement to A jinx that causes the target to be hoisted into the air by their ankle(s); the counter-jinx to this jinx is Liberacorpus. Bounty given - Lear

18 May 2025, 10:33
English errors and spelling mistakes
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In the 7th year shop, it makes more sense for the description of this spell to read: A charm that produces a large ring of fire around the caster, conjured and controlled by the caster's wand.

I read the wiki and all other mentions of this charm, and this just makes its use more clear and prevents confusion etc.

Bounty given - to note, some of these descriptions are shorter than i would like because of the shop grid alignment. These suggestions may need to be reverted if the shop breaks on some devices.

xxxxx ⊹✧𝖫𝖸𝖠𝖭𝖭𝖠 ~ ency
☼ 𝖺 𝖽𝗋𝖾𝖺𝗆𝖾𝗋, 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗍'𝗌 𝗐𝗁𝖺𝗍 𝗌𝗁𝖾 𝗐𝖺𝗌 ☼

⊹ Sta 6 | Eva 10 | Str 7 | Wis 4 | Arc 4 | Acc 10 ⊹
─── ‿︵˓ ʚ♡ɞ ˓ ︵ ‿ ───



xxxxx

18 May 2025, 10:41
English errors and spelling mistakes
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Should say A charm used to move bodies (conscious or otherwise) by suspending them a few inches into the air. This spell is able to move people who are unable to walk.

Bounty given - to note, some of these descriptions are shorter than i would like because of the shop grid alignment. These suggestions may need to be reverted if the shop breaks on some devices.

xxxxx ⊹✧𝖫𝖸𝖠𝖭𝖭𝖠 ~ ency
☼ 𝖺 𝖽𝗋𝖾𝖺𝗆𝖾𝗋, 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗍'𝗌 𝗐𝗁𝖺𝗍 𝗌𝗁𝖾 𝗐𝖺𝗌 ☼

⊹ Sta 6 | Eva 10 | Str 7 | Wis 4 | Arc 4 | Acc 10 ⊹
─── ‿︵˓ ʚ♡ɞ ˓ ︵ ‿ ───



xxxxx

18 May 2025, 10:49
English errors and spelling mistakes
It may be intentional but the Repelling Spell (Repello) is written twice with different descriptions.

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Already been done!

Reviewed, already done as mentioned - Lear
Last edited by Amelia Lerelle on 18 May 2025, 11:23, edited 1 time in total.

It matters not what someone is born, but what they grow to be!

18 May 2025, 10:52
English errors and spelling mistakes
An extra space after the brackets in ‘Stickfast Hex (Colloshoo )’
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In Protego Maxima there is no spell incarnation written simply ‘Protego Maxima’ without the additional (Protego Maxima).
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Gobstone to Skunk (Mephitifors)
A transfiguration spell that transformed a gobstone into a skunk.
Should be…
Gobstone to Skunk (Mephitifors)
A transfiguration spell that transforms a gobstone into a skunk.

Bounty given - Lear

It matters not what someone is born, but what they grow to be!

18 May 2025, 14:12
English errors and spelling mistakes
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Instead of the "Sun-Light Charm", I believe it should be adjusted to "Sunlight Charm".
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For the worm conjuring spell, the description states that it transforms the target into worms opposed to directly just conjuring them.
Sun-light was how they had it listed in this reference thread, but I am fine editing it due to this wiki reference.
According to this reference it transforms rather than conjures.

Bounty disseminated - Lear

Stamina-7|Evasion-6|Strength-2|Wisdom-9|Arcane Power-15|Accuracy-8
Prodigal Defense Against the Dark Arts Learner | Beast Master

18 May 2025, 15:01
English errors and spelling mistakes
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In every other sentence it starts with A but in the summoning charm it is missing a A at the begining of the sentence.

Fixed - Lear. Bounty given
Last edited by Damien Dragonclaw on 18 May 2025, 16:00, edited 1 time in total.

STA - 7 | EVA - 8 | STR - 6
WIS - 5 | AP - 5 | ACC - 10
STA - 3 | EVA - 6 | STR - 8
WIS - 8 | AP - 2 | ACC - 8