19 Oct 2025, 15:47
English errors and spelling mistakes
Hello! Saw this in the Timeline forum

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Done Lear (Oct 19)

Chocolate, chocolate, and more chocolate

Star and Storm

25 Oct 2025, 14:03
English errors and spelling mistakes
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The first line should be "a new iNPC" or "iNPCs".

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Fixed, Aiko (October 25) - Thank you!

Sta: 6 | Eva: 6| Str: 5 | Wis: 9 | Arc: 6 | Acc: 8
Sta: 4 | Eva: 7 | Str: 2 | Wis: 7 | Arc: 9 | Acc: 6
Quoth the Raven “Nevermore.”

4 Dec 2025, 17:31
English errors and spelling mistakes
scrivenshafts quill shop

on the item 'black quill', the q in quill needs to be capitalised and a period should be added after feather.
on the item 'blue quill', the q in quill needs to be capitalised
on the item 'empty inkwell', the i in inkwell needs to be capitalised
on the item 'grey quill', the q in quill needs to be capitalised
on the item 'lilac ink', the i in ink needs to be capitalised
on the item 'peacock feather', the f in feather needs to be capitalised
on the item 'disappearing ink', the d in disappearing and the i in ink need to be capitalised

(i would put in pictures but it keeps not working for me)

It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien

4 Dec 2025, 17:37
English errors and spelling mistakes
gladrags wizardwear

in the description for the item 'armoured ballgown', it says "...so the armor turns into spikes if some gets within..." and the some should should be changed to someone
on the item 'cloak of ravven', i dont think there should be a second v in the word raven? also there needs to be a period after the word mystery
on the item 'moving pillow', the p in pillow needs to be capitalised
in the description of the item 'wicks enchanted barrettes', there needs to be a period after the word wand

It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien

4 Dec 2025, 17:42
English errors and spelling mistakes
madam puddifoots tea shop

in the description for the item 'cherry cheesecake', there is a / at the end of the sentence instead of a period
in the description for the item 'tea', there needs to be a period after the word tea
on all three versions of the item 'valentines day card', the c in card needs to be capitalised
on the item 'winken, blinken & nodds enchanted blinglets', there needs to be a comma after the word nodds

It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien

4 Dec 2025, 17:43
English errors and spelling mistakes
hogs head

in the description for the item 'wheel of cheese', there needs to be a period after the word cheese

It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien

4 Dec 2025, 17:46
English errors and spelling mistakes
muggle artefacts

on the item 'hammer and nails', there needs to n in nails needs to be capitalised
on the item 'old carpet', the c in carpet needs to be capitalised
on the item 'signed photograph', the p in photograph needs to be capitalised
on the item 'wizard tight', the t in tight needs to be capitalised

It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien

4 Dec 2025, 23:06
English errors and spelling mistakes
zonkos joke shop

on the item 'annoy-o-tron', the o needs to be capitalised
on the item 'bewitched pumpkin', the p in pumpkin needs to be capitalised
in the description for the item 'camo cloak', there needs to be a period after the word forest
on the item 'flying cocktail umbrella' the c in cocktail and the u in umbrella need to be capitalised
in the description for the item 'helga halfhelms squee', the p in pureblood should not be capitalised
on the item 'map of the undergrounds of hogwarts', the u in undergrounds needs to be capitalised
on the item 'pygmy puff slippers', the s in slippers needs to be capitalised
on the item 'vicious badge', the b in badge needs to be capitalised

It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien

4 Dec 2025, 23:11
English errors and spelling mistakes
main square

on the item 'brandys brights barrettes', there should be an apostrophe separating the y and the s in brandys
on the item 'magical christmas ball', the b in ball needs to be capitalised

It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien

4 Dec 2025, 23:12
English errors and spelling mistakes
three broomsticks

on the item 'butterbeer pint', the p in pint needs to be capitalised

It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien