English errors and spelling mistakes
again in the magical races/talents and special abilities thread under the third year part-giant ability of ‘grapple’ within the ‘part-giant actions’ section in the third sentence, it says ‘opponent s considered bound’ instead of ‘is’
same thread under the third year seer ability of prophecy, there is no space between the thing below (bolded and underlined)
yippee same thread as before, under beast master, the prerequisite and the effect explanations are not on different lines as seen below bolded and underlined
same thread under the third year seer ability of prophecy, there is no space between the thing below (bolded and underlined)
same thread once more under advanced apparition as well as under the just plain apparition and in the splinching effect paragraph, second sentence it says “st. mungos” instead of “st mungo’s”. just needs an apostropheNote:Please note, this DOES NOT allow you to…
yippee same thread as before, under beast master, the prerequisite and the effect explanations are not on different lines as seen below bolded and underlined
Prerequisite: Must own a pet. Effect: Those with this skill gain a separate action for their pet. …
It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien
English errors and spelling mistakes
Also edited.Paris Soliel wrote: 16 Jul 2025, 22:32 again in the magical races/talents and special abilities thread under the third year part-giant ability of ‘grapple’ within the ‘part-giant actions’ section in the third sentence, it says ‘opponent s considered bound’ instead of ‘is’
same thread under the third year seer ability of prophecy, there is no space between the thing below (bolded and underlined)same thread once more under advanced apparition as well as under the just plain apparition and in the splinching effect paragraph, second sentence it says “st. mungos” instead of “st mungo’s”. just needs an apostropheNote:Please note, this DOES NOT allow you to…
yippee same thread as before, under beast master, the prerequisite and the effect explanations are not on different lines as seen below bolded and underlinedPrerequisite: Must own a pet. Effect: Those with this skill gain a separate action for their pet. …
| 𝗈𝗇𝖾 𝗅𝖺𝗌𝗍 𝗍𝗎𝗋𝗇, 𝗁𝖾 𝗁𝖾𝗅𝖽 𝗁𝗂𝗌 𝖻𝗋𝖾𝖺𝗍𝗁 𝗍𝗂𝗅 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗒 𝗋𝖾𝖺𝖼𝗁𝖾𝖽 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝖿𝗂𝖿𝗍𝗁 𝗁𝗈𝗎𝗌𝖾 𝗈𝗇 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗅𝖾𝖿𝗍 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝖺𝗍 𝗈𝗇𝖼𝖾, 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗍𝖾𝖺𝗋𝗌 𝖼𝖺𝗆𝖾 𝗋𝗈𝗅𝗅𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗂𝗇 |
English errors and spelling mistakes
found another one same thread again. its under the faq of the eighth special ability of ‘binding mark’; within both the question of ‘does a mark have to be touched to be activated?’ and the explanation, it says ‘voldimort’ once instead of ‘voldemort’ and three times it says ‘petigrew’ when it should be ‘pettigrew’
It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien
English errors and spelling mistakes
weehoo another one same thread (magical races/talents and special abilities); the effect of the sixteenth special ability—corporeal patronus messenger—says the following (shown below and the confusing part underlined and bolded
(sorry for all the stuff people im an istj i cant help it)
i think it should be a comma after that sentence? well, it needs a little more grammatical help than just a comma i feel. maybe a ‘…to another location and/or your patronus can bring others to your location.’ or something like thatEffect: Ability to use your patronus as a messenger. This does more than bring forth your partonus, you can send your patronus from the topic that you are in to another location. your patronus can bring others to your location. …
(sorry for all the stuff people im an istj i cant help it)
It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien
English errors and spelling mistakes
22nd ability (healing sage) in the magical races/talents and special abilities thread; there is no space after the word ‘note’ at the bottom at the bottom of the description below the effect and the word ‘this’ which comes right after. probably also needs a colon after ‘note’
It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien
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okay this ones kinda stupid but same thread again 25th of keen eye under effect it shows the following
like i said, its stupid but its there……..
and i just noticed how the underline under ‘not’ carries over into the spaceThere is a 25% chance of automatically finding something (if there is anything that can be found) not someone.
like i said, its stupid but its there……..
It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien
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32nd ability (paragon of health) has a run-on and incomplete thought sentence shown below
this can be fixed by changing the period between sentences to a comma… Whenever you check in with your party you make sure to tend to their minor wounds and diseases. Causing your very presence to boost your allies’ resolve be it passively by a sort of aura (flavor) or by actual physical assistance (alternative flavor).
It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien
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49th ability is rapid reviver and i got a stupid one and an actual one. the stupid one is that unlike every other prerequisite thing that says none, the n is capitalized. and this one isnt. my actual comment is that there is no space between ‘effect’ and ‘once’ at the beginning of the effects paragraph
It simply isn’t an adventure worth telling if there aren’t any dragons.
-JRR Tolkien
English errors and spelling mistakes
Fixed! Good catch :)Paris Soliel wrote: 16 Jul 2025, 23:14 found another one same thread again. its under the faq of the eighth special ability of ‘binding mark’; within both the question of ‘does a mark have to be touched to be activated?’ and the explanation, it says ‘voldimort’ once instead of ‘voldemort’ and three times it says ‘petigrew’ when it should be ‘pettigrew’
English errors and spelling mistakes
I ended up changing it to the below, hope it’s sufficient!Paris Soliel wrote: 16 Jul 2025, 23:46 weehoo another one same thread (magical races/talents and special abilities); the effect of the sixteenth special ability—corporeal patronus messenger—says the following (shown below and the confusing part underlined and boldedi think it should be a comma after that sentence? well, it needs a little more grammatical help than just a comma i feel. maybe a ‘…to another location and/or your patronus can bring others to your location.’ or something like thatEffect: Ability to use your patronus as a messenger. This does more than bring forth your partonus, you can send your patronus from the topic that you are in to another location. your patronus can bring others to your location. …
(sorry for all the stuff people im an istj i cant help it)
Ability to use your patronus as a messenger. This does more than bring forth your patronus, you can send your patronus from the topic that you are in into another location, and your patronus can bring others to your location as well.