21 May 2025, 01:57
English errors and spelling mistakes
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Should read as any other spells and potions

Cant add the 'any' because the potion cant undo 'any', there would be restrictions. Your screen cap has an 'a' that does not belong that is not showing up now so was likely edited on its own but did not belong regardless so just giving the bounty.

✧-✧-✧They say that words are stronger
than actions but word's can also hurt more✧-✧-✧
ℂ𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝔽𝕝𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣𝕤

21 May 2025, 02:02
English errors and spelling mistakes
Restoration Potion - should be “A potion that undoes the effects of other spells and potions.”

Noxious Potion - should be “ A potion that creates a poisonous cloud that will diminish the physical and mental capacities of anyone breathing it in.”

Drowsiness Draught - one and should be removed.

I have no idea what you are asking for, sorry.

Meiyu Xiang | Staterna ponere. | Ivan Aleksandar Baskakova 𖤝

21 May 2025, 02:05
English errors and spelling mistakes
This is kind of picky but

Alihotsy potion should be
A potion that causes hysterical laughter upon drinking or inhaling its fumes
Rather than
A potion that upon drinking or inhaling its fumes causes hysterical laughter

Sure, I don't think the other version was technically wrong but maybe I'm the wrong one, edited. Bounty given.

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WIS - 10 | AP - 8 | ACC - 8
seer • advanced casting

21 May 2025, 02:28
English errors and spelling mistakes
I'm not sure if this is okay to include in the bounty board or even if the omission of the following is intended, but here's a list of missing potions (descriptions in quotations pulled directly from the potion system):

- Angel's Trumpet Draught -- "An uncommon poison that induces a series of potent effects including dryness of mouth, thirst, photophobia, confusion, aggression and hallucination that progressively worsen until the drinker suffers a seizure." [ingested] [RESTRICTED]
- Babbling Beverage -- "Renders the affected party unable to form a coherent sentence" [ingested/topical]
- Blood Root Poison -- "A very strong, uncommon poison. Causes discomfort and burning with skin contact and upon ingestion leads to vomiting and the eventual loss of consciousness" [ingestion/topical] [RESTRICTED]
- Confusing Concoction -- "Causes a heightened sense of paranoia in the affected person, making it difficult to tell friend from foe" [ingestion/topical]
- Dizziness Draught -- "Causes the affected person to feel light-headed and lose their sense of balance" [ingestion/topical]
- Dogbreath Potion -- "Turns every breath of the drinker to flame" [ingestion]
- Essence of Insanity -- "Temporarily renders the drinker utterly mad" [ingestion] [RESTRICTED]
- Felix Felicis -- "Liquid luck, the drinker just can't seem to fail." [ingestion] [RESTRICTED]
- Malevolent Mixture -- "A potion that makes the drinker violently ill and fatigued, making them barely able to move or think" [ingestion] [RESTRICTED]
- Moon Seed Poison -- "Greatly drains the drinker's magical ability, leaving them almost magically inert" [ingestion] [RESTRICTED]
- Mopsus Potion -- "Grants the drinker telekinetic powers" [ingestion] [RESTRICTED]
- Muffling Draught -- "Those who inhale its fumes become unable to speak" [inhaled]
- Polyjuice Potion -- "Allows the drinker to turn into someone else, provided that the DNA of that particular someone has been imbibed during the brewing process." [ingestion] [RESTRICTED]
- Pompion Potion -- "Turns the drinker's head into a pumpkin." [ingestion]
- Regerminating Potion -- "A few drops of the potions are sufficient to regerminate any plant. A herbological essential!" [environmental spray]
- Veritaserum -- "You can only tell the truth" [ingestion] [RESTRICTED]
- Weedosoros -- "A potent poison that near-instantly weeds. It is also exceptionally painful to those stupid enough to ingest it, and will cause violent convulsions and seizures." [ingestion/topical] [RESTRICTED]
- Wolfsbane Potion -- "A miracle cure that allows werewolves to maintain their humanity while transformed." [ingestion] [RESTRICTED]
General Fixes
These suggestions are based on potion descriptions in our site potion system and lesson lore -- some of this contradicts what is found on the Harry Potter wiki

Anti-Paralysis:
- specifically cures paralysis caused by spells

Barruffio's Brain Elixer
- could also add that it is usually useless and in some cases, toxic

Cough Potion
- also soothes throat irritation

Cure for Boils
- clears both boils and blemishes, both magical and mundane; ingested

Deflating Draught
- topical

Doxycide:
- sprayed to environment ((this one might be just me being pedantic))

Dr. Ubbly's Oblivious Unction
- States: "A healing potion that is used for maladies of the mind."
- Should be (or something to this effect): "A topical potion for fading non-magical scars, particularly effective against mental scarring."

Draught of Peace:
- Is less about abating anxiety and agitation (though it would also do that) and more about inducing a sense of calm and introspective, meditative connection

Drowsiness Draught
- inhaled, not drank
- Despite its name, doesn't actually induce drowsiness, but rather causes physical fatigue, slows motor function and impairs ability to focus

Erumpent Potion
- add: "--when shattered." (or when exposed to air, or whatever alternative, as its the chemical reaction on contact with air that causes the explosion)

Essence of Dittany
- could specify "severe open wounds"

Fatiguing Infusion
- From: "A potion that has fumes that cause fatigue."
- To: "A potion that has fumes that cause fatigue, dully reflexes, and slowed thinking."

Fire Breathing Potion
- add "--at will." (as the drinker can control when they do or do not breathe fire when under its effects)

Floating Potion
- this is should be topical, not ingested. It affects anything splashed

Garish Pink Poison
- ingested and topical

Garroting Gas
- perhaps adjust the description to be "--chokes those within its fumes." Because the choking stops if they move out of the fumes despite still having been previously exposed to it.

Grand Pepperup Potion
- Cure for magical and mundane flu-like illnesses (as opposed to pepperup which only works on non-magical)

Invisibility Potion
- Not just for drinking. Also applies invisibility on vaporous contact. Ingested = slower onset, lasts longer. Vaporous contact = faster onset, short duration.

Mandrake Restorative Draught
- Doesn't reverse transfigurations. It reverses petrification causes by dark creatures, curses, and other magical means. (although HP wiki says it does reverse transfiguration in which case, the potion system description maybe needs an update?)

Memory Potion
- According to site lore and lessons, this potion functions like a sort of introspective 1st-person pensieve, allowing near perfect recollection of focused memories

Pet Tonic
- Current description is a little misleading since it doesn't affect pet's emotional states so doesn't make them happy, but rather heals magical and non-magical pet illnesses and ailments

Potion of Dreamless Sleep
- also induces drowsiness

Replenishing Potion
- it doesn't affect certain liquids - it just duplicates whatever liquids with which it comes in contact (perhaps "non-magical liquids" if the 'certain liquids' was meant to specify that it doesn't work to replenish potions or magical liquids -- as confirm by Dealla 6/10/2023 in discord hogwarts-help)

Restoration Potion
- Should be "A potion that, when topically applied to an object or living being, undoes the last potion or spell by which they were affected."

Revive Potion
- Could be "When ingested, rouses an unconscious individual back to consciousness." (as they may not be 'sleeping', per se)

Scintillation Solution
- Add: "--and makes them prone to sarcasm."

Shrinking Solution
- It doesn't necessarily make someone itty-bitty as this could also be an antidote to a swelling solution and similar potions/spell effects and may simply return a person back to normal size.

Skele-gro
- also heals fractures in addition to regrowing bones

Vitamix Potion
- also causes the drinker to think more quickly

Volubilis Potion
- can also be used to alter an existing voice

Wiggenweld Potion
- does not cure injuries. It is "A remedy that awakens people from both magical and mundane sleep."

Wit Sharpening Potion
- Should be "Wit-Sharpening Potion"
- Also increases mental processing speed

Made the edits. The potions do not need to have a full listing of uses, these potions originally had things like "bottled galaxy" and "touch the stars" that I did fix/change/remove before making these visible. Still, edited. Bounty given.
Last edited by Evelynn Decipio on 21 May 2025, 17:46, edited 1 time in total.

ᴏᴛʜᴇʀ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀꜱ: Owen Lochridge | Margarethe Fransson | Dottie Dunlot [comc professor]

21 May 2025, 08:33
English errors and spelling mistakes
Alihotsy Draught - A potion that, upon drinking or inhaling its fumes, causes hysterical laughter.

Bruise Healing Paste - that is should just be replaced with a comma, as it does not look like something which is guaranteed to heal bruises, it actually is guaranteed to heal bruises.

Cranberry Cleaner- A potion that, when ingested, cures internal infections.

Garroting Gas -
A potion that, when exposed to air, releases a colourless gas that chokes those exposed to it.

Done - bounty delivered.

iNPC: Reuben Garcia

21 May 2025, 13:08
English errors and spelling mistakes
Confusing Concoction
A potion that when ingested, causes confusion and a heightened sense of paranoia in the affected person, making it difficult to tell friend from foe. -I think this is a grammatical error, and you just need to add an and between causes confusion and a heightened sense of paranoia. Sorry if I'm not making much sense!

Done, bounty delivered.

I don't break the rules, I expand them for my need.

Minnie Duke Lucy Hills

21 May 2025, 16:15
English errors and spelling mistakes
(not a potion problem, just a picture problem)

Replenishing potion has a slightly skewed picture that creates a thin bar of white on my device. Not huge, not really a spelling mistake, but probably something that is good to be cleaned up.
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Suggestion on the rewording of Muffling Draught: A potion that has fumes that can cause someone to lose their voice. --> A potion whose fumes causes the inhaler to lose their voice.

Same with Fatiguing Infusion: A potion that has fumes that cause fatigue, dull reflexes and slow thinking. --> A potions whose fumes cause fatigue, dull reflexes, and slowed thinking.

Cranberry Cleaner grammar for mild clarification, comma after 'that': A potion that, when ingested, cures internal infections.

Same with Confusing Concoction: A potion that, when ingested, causes confusion a heightened sense of paranoia in the affected person, making it difficult to tell friend from foe.

A bit of a run-on sentence in Baruffio’s Brain Elixir: A potion that allegedly increases a drinker's brain power, h However, the effects of this potion are underwhelming, often useless, and in some cases,: toxic. (Alternatively replace the comma before "however" with a semicolon and it's just as good: A potion that allegedly increases a drinker's brain power; however, the effects of this potion are underwhelming, often useless, and in some cases, toxic.)

Babbling Beverage replace "that" with "and" (still messy but adds a little more clarity to the affected party in question): A potion that can be ingested or placed topically on a target that renders the affected party unable to form a coherent sentence. --> A potion that can be ingested or placed topically on a target and renders the affected party unable to form a coherent sentence.


No problems if anyone caught these sooner than I did or if these notes are no good. I was just curious, took a look at the new stuff happening and noticed things.

Done - Bounty given.
Last edited by Piérre Marchonné on 22 May 2025, 14:52, edited 1 time in total.

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21 May 2025, 16:17
English errors and spelling mistakes
Anti-Paralysis Potion
A poison that cures paralysis caused by spells, such as the full body-bind curse.

Not sure if this is an error or not but shouldn't it be..
A POTION that cures paralysis caused by spells, such as the full body-bind curse.
All of the other potions read as 'a potion that etc...'

Good catch - bounty given.

kim sato
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sta • 10 | eva • 16 | str • 2 | wis • 10 | arc • 7 | acc • 17
sta • 10 | eva • 15 | str • 12 | wis • 7 | arc • 4 | acc • 17
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21 May 2025, 16:28
English errors and spelling mistakes
Hiccoughing Solution
A potion that causes the drinker to break into a fit of hiccoughs.

Should this be Hiccups Solution? If so, then...
Hiccups Solution
A potion that causes the drinker to break into a fit of hiccups.

If it's not hiccups and actually is hiccoughs, never mind!

EDIT: Not sure if I'm supposed to put my findings all in one post or if I'm supposed to add in separate posts. Sooo...

Can place them in one post or in multiple. Just if I already answered the post like this, please don't add to the post because I will totally miss it!

As for this one, Hiccoughs might be a British way of saying it...

kim sato
tone bakugo
sta • 10 | eva • 16 | str • 2 | wis • 10 | arc • 7 | acc • 17
sta • 10 | eva • 15 | str • 12 | wis • 7 | arc • 4 | acc • 17
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21 May 2025, 17:37
English errors and spelling mistakes
Cure for Boils
A potion that clears both boils and blemishes, (both magical and mundane) when ingested.
Correction: Cure for Boils:
A potion that clears both magical and mundane boils and blemishes when ingested.
Floating Potion:
A potion that, upon contact, causes the target to float a few feet above the ground.
Bounty given

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