Writing Criticism:

Lol, Btw, if you want 2 post new ideas that ur thinking about to get people's opinions on it, that's fine 2

I have nothing...I live for Avery lore!!

Phoenix Zhang wrote: 8 Jun 2025, 00:13 I have nothing...I live for Avery lore!!

Also, if you don't have critique, just say what you like hehe. Think of this as a version of the Complement the Person Above you thread. Only, ur only complementing their writing and what they could do better

I will take any criticism. I can’t criticize you though Nyx because I have never any of your prices sorry

Amelia Lerelle wrote: 8 Jun 2025, 00:35 I will take any criticism. I can’t criticize you though Nyx because I have never any of your prices sorry

That's ok! I can post some of my pieces if you'd like 2 read them since i'm open 2 all critique hehe

Here is a piece that i wrote a while ago, it's a solo. Tell me what y'all think?:

I've Become So Numb I Can't Feel You There [Solo]

That is AMAZING!!!

Here's something I'd like opinions on:

You're.. Home [SOLO] [Simon Lore]

I LOVE the song lyrics in yours, Nyx! The title- I love that song.

Ill take opinions on the one

To Embrace and To Let Go

Phoenix Zhang wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 00:13 Ill take opinions on the one

To Embrace and To Let Go

I love it! Super dramatic in a quiet sort of way