Detention Shameful Casting pv Fin

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Welcome to Detention!
The requirement for this thread is 200 Words. All rules for detention apply.
Your task is to write a detailed story about two wizards trapped in a forest, needing to find away out, together.
After the 200 word requirement is fulfilled, your detention is over, however you can feel free to write more in this thread if you wish :)
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Monica had sent out the owls for this detention time. She got her self ready nice and early to make it to the classroom plenty of time. Kiwi, her rat, sat on her shoulder, thinking this was a fun day to be touring the castle. Once the two students had arrived, Monica instructed them,
"Please take a seat. Now, please know that I am taking into consideration the fact that your not Hogwarts students, that you may have different rules in your own schools, but here we take unauthorized magic casting seriously." Monica paced about the front of the room, clearly letting her role get to her head, much as she wish she could deny it, Monica like to be in charge, and have a sense of authority... but could she be leaning into the prefect role too much?

Naw.

"For your detention, I want you each to write me a story," She smirked to herself. "This will be a story about 2 wizards, you can interpret that however you want, could be yourselves, someone you know, or made up wizards. But these wizards are trapped in a dark cursed forest... and have to find a way out." She went to the front of the class, sitting on top the desk, "You will have as much time as you need, and when you are both done, I would like you to read your story out to each other." She looked at them, seeing if there were any questions, "If you have questions, feel free to ask. You may start whenever you are ready." Monica pulled out a book she brought to read while they wrote.
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| 𝑰𝒏𝒕𝒆𝒓𝒂𝒄𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝑾𝒊𝒕𝒉: Amelia (@Lily Blaze's iNPC) | Andy (@Rita Su's iNPC)|
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Detention Shameful Casting pv Fin
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RPing as iNPC Andy Menton

Andy knew by heart that he had done something wrong. Both breaking the rules of casting unauthorized magic and upsetting his friend Amelia. He should have lied to get Amelia at least out of the trouble, or he could wait for Amelia to speak first and leave him some time to think about what to say, nevertheless, he chose the worst option, and landed both of them in detention on Oct 9th, exactly one day after the crazy fall ball.

It was supposed to be a nice day for Andy. The weather was quite nice, with the warm autumn sun shining through the trees in the campgrounds, and Andy spent some relaxing time talking to a Russian girl called Annika to recharge his batteries after he had a fun and exhausted night of petting the animals in the petting zoo during the fall ball. Now, he had to go to the classroom for his detention, which almost ruined his day of relaxation. But considering the seriousness of his fault, he knew he deserved to be in detention. Unwillingly, he left the campground surrounded by beautiful green trees under the warm autumn sun and went to the empty classroom to serve his detention. Hopefully, it won`t take too long.

Bringing his quill and a paper, Andy went into the classroom and found out the girl who caught them and Amelia had both arrived. He heard Amelia asking the girl in charge how many words should they write and saw her went back to her desk and began to write before the girl in charge replied to her. Thinking about Amelia must be mad of him being selfish, Andy said nothing before sitting down on a desk and also beginning to write his own story of two wizards trying to get out of the dark forest. That was supposed to be quite fun to be honest, Andy had imagined things that were a lot worse for their detention, such as cleaning the table or writing lines. Thinking he had to read his complete story out loud to Amelia, Andy decided to express his true feelings about Amelia through that story. He actually still considered Amelia as friends and wanted to do something for Amelia to bring back her trust and mend their friendship. But he knew it must be difficult because he knew his selfish acts made Amelia extremely mad, and he still did not know what he should do to make Amelia consider him as her friend again.
Word count: 418
Interacting with: @Lily Blaze as iNPC Amelia Miller, @Monica Evans
Mentioning: @Alma Stoll as iNPC Annika Novikov
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OOC note: this thread takes place after Andy met up with Annika
Last edited by Rita Su on 12 Nov 2022, 08:43, edited 2 times in total.

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Detention Shameful Casting pv Fin
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A question, so quick... something Monica didn't expect. She was about to answer when the girl went right into writing... Pausing Monica started to wonder if giving her an answer mattered at all, why ask if she was just going to start anyways?

However it seemed that the answer should be stated in any case, no sense having a 5 sentence story to read off, this was meant to engage their creativity, not be something they write off.

"I expect a 200 word story, of course if you end up writing more than so be it." She started to wonder if that would be enough... or too much? She never gave out a punishment like this, how did she know what she was doing?

Time seemed to tick by, Monica lost interest in keeping track. Kiwi slept in her hood, while Monica sat on the desk reading away, it was an interesting book her sister gave to her called, 'of Mice and Men' She rather liked it... though there was a slight off puting-ness to one of the characters, but in an endearing sort of way. She finished a chapter to look up from her novel to see how the two were coming along, "How is it going guys?"
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The Detention word requirement is fulfilled for both of you, you are both freed! If you would like to continue in this thread by all means, I am still here for as long as you wish it to go on :) I am a little curious to hear the stories you guys come up with.
| 𝑰𝒏𝒕𝒆𝒓𝒂𝒄𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝑾𝒊𝒕𝒉: Amelia (@Lily Blaze's iNPC) | Andy (@Rita Su's iNPC)|
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Detention Shameful Casting pv Fin
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RPing as iNPC Andy Menton

"I expect 200 words, but if you ended up writing more then so be it." This was the answer from the girl in charge regarding how many words they should write. "That`s a wise answer, I think the girl probably guessed we are gonna write more than 200 words. Let me just write down the story as I think and let me see how many words I end up writing." Andy thought as words began to flow from his quill to the paper on his desk.

After writing for some time, he finally finished writing the exciting story of two wizards being trapped in a dark forest and was quite satisfied of what he wrote. He found out he has written a whole a page of the story that was partly based on what happened between Andy and Amelia, and once Amelia also finished, he would share his story to Amelia, and hopefully it made Amelia understand how he truly feels about her without offending her and making her mad again. And that was what he wrote:
Two Wizards in a Dark Forest
Once upon a time, there were two wizards that were originally good friends. The two wizards were courageous and adventurous, so one night, they decided to do something brave and went to a dark forest that was not too far away from their residence for a secret adventure. Other wizards had told them the dark forest was extremely dangerous, as there were many dangerous creatures, and worse, it was covered with a horrible curse that no one knew, and it was believed the dark curse in the forest would try to kill everyone who went into the forest. No wizard was allowed to enter the dark forest, but the two daredevils were even more attracted to the dark forest by the fact that entering the forest is prohibited and they decided to enter the dark forest by themselves in the mid of the night when everyone was asleep to find out the secret of the dark forest and what curse is in it.

So, that midnight, after everyone had fallen asleep, the adventurous two wizards got up from their bed, put on their clothes and shoes, grabbed their wand just in case, sneaked out of their bed in tip toes, and went on their secret adventure to the forbidden dark forest. It was extremely dark outside, s so the wizards moved their wands and casted Lumos to help them see in the dark. They walked for a while, and soon found themselves in front of the dark forest.

They entered the dark forest, and very soon, find themselves trapped in the forest and in big trouble. As other wizards told them, the two wizards soon found out forest is extremely dark with various horrible magical creatures, such as ghosts, poison spiders, and other scary looking creatures that could probably kill them at any minute. Even worse, the curse in the dark forest made them nearly impossible to find the way out of the dark forest. Due to the curse, the dark forest was a maze, and it was extremely difficult to find the way out of this maze that was specially designed to trap wizards in. And the effects of their DADA spells were also suppressed due to the horrible curse. They must work together to find the way out of the nearly impossible to solve maze and tried to stay away from the attacks of those horrible magical creatures.

However, they later found out there were also some challenges to their friendship besides all those horrible things outside in the forest. It was hard for them to work together. One of the wizards were finding the other one being selfish and only thinking about themselves. "I thought we are friends, but you are indeed such a selfish person! You are only coming up your own ways to work out of the maze in this dark forest and never pay attention to what I`m saying! We are no longer friends!" The angry wizard shouted out to their partner. "But we must work together to get out of the forest! I know I am being selfish, and I apologize to you! I swear I won`t next time! Could you give me another chance? We can never solve the problem if we just keep blaming each other and don`t actually solve the problem!" The other wizard responded to the first wizard. However, the first wizard did not listen to the other wizards` words, and they found it impossible to work together.

The two wizards never returned to their residence after their secret trip to the dark forest that midnight. Other wizards believed they had died in the dark forest, but no one had seen their dead bodies, and the entrance of the dark forest were permanently closed after that event, even to today.
After he finished writing, he waited for Amelia to also finish so that they could share the story to each other. He was not sure if Amelia would think of his story, and he wondered what story Amelia would write, and was kind of willing to hear her story, though he still did not want to talk to Amelia personally at this point. Hopefully their relationship would kind of improve because of the detention.
Word count: 894-21=873
@Lily Blaze as iNPC Amelia Miller @Monica Evans
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Yeah, let`s continue! I cannot believe I wrote for so long! Hope to see what Amelia comes up with!

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Detention Shameful Casting pv Fin
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It was as if Monica could hear the ticking time of the clock as time slugged on, though there was no clock in the room, she felt as though she was back home in a state of waiting, the old grandfather clock in the hall ticking away before.....

"I have finished my story."

Not a chime.

Monica put down her book, seemed both of them had finished writing, now what? She wasn't a teacher, nor was she someone that was even skilled in writing herself...It was in this moment she realized how little she actually knew what she was doing, but couldn't show that, she had to be professional, no signs of second guessing.

She stood up, taking to the centre of the class, just like her professors did during their teachings. Glancing down at their parchments, it was clear both of them blew past the 200 words she had given. It was good, but also made her wonder if she should have made the word count higher? No point in dwelling any longer in the time prison she had created, she gestured for them to come up to front, "Excellent work... Now good writing must be shared, please come up and share with us what you have written." She didn't pick who went first, she left the choice up to the two of them.

Once one of them took to the front Monica sat down in one of the empty seats in the 'audience'. She listened to the first story, and felt a sense of pride, perhaps it wasn't just her meddling in their friendship, but a general want for them to mend whatever was broken. Of course Monica's main goal was to remind them not to cast spells outside of class...But it was how her father had raised her, any good friendship is one worth fighting for, though Monica didn't know these students, or their situation at all, there was something that didn't feel right when she caught them breaking rules... something that she felt she could help fix... perhaps these stories were the bridge to that mending.

After the first story was read, Monica looked over to the second student, waiting for them to take to the front. Listening to their story, it seemed both of them followed a similar theme... so it was clear there was an element from both sides of wanting to fix whatever was broken. Monica smirked to herself...Perhaps she was a good prefect after all? Maybe not an intimidating one, or with hard punishments, but one that uses what tools she has to help get to roots of issues... or maybe that was just her ego getting to her.

After both stories were read, Monica took to the front again, "Good work you two, you should be proud of the stories you have written." She picked up her book that she left at the front of the class. "Your detention is served, you are free to go." She took a moment before adding, "But do remember that spells are for class... as both of you wrote about, breaking rules leads to nothing but trouble, so I hope you stay out of it from now on." She gave them a smirk before opening the door to let them leave.
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Congratulations! Wonderful stories! I loved them both, and I hope you guys are able to mend your broken trust, I'm glad this detention could serve you, as you served it haha :)
I'll leave it open for you guys to reply, then close it once both of you leave the room.
| 𝑰𝒏𝒕𝒆𝒓𝒂𝒄𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝑾𝒊𝒕𝒉: Amelia (@Lily Blaze's iNPC) | Andy (@Rita Su's iNPC)|
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Detention Shameful Casting pv Fin
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RPing as iNPC Andy Menton

Andy finally smiled when Amelia finished reading her story to him. The story itself was brilliantly written, and it was through that story that Andy finally knew Amelia had forgiven him for his selfishness. Amelia`s story had saved the day and mended their broken friendship. The story had a happy ending, so did their friendship. The detention was a lesson learned for Andy, not only about the school rules, but also about how to maintain a friendship. It was a day Andy should try to remember.

"I forgive you." These was the last three words Amelia said to him before the Horned Serpent left the empty classroom, leaving him and the girl in charge inside the room. "Thank you for forgiving me for my selfishness. Milly, you saved my day. We shall be friends again now. Bye!" Andy waved goodbye to Amelia as she left the classroom.

Andy walked up to the girl in charge, and also waved goodbye to her, "Thank you for coming up with such a genius idea to mend our broken friendship. I will go now, bye!" After that, Andy walked to the classroom door, and left the empty classroom with a smile, feeling a sense of relief as his detention was finally served and he could be friends with Amelia again now.
Andy left the thread
Word count: 215
@Lily Blaze as iNPC Amelia Miller @Monica Evans

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