Dirt and Grime pv | detention

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Ebony had not realised that handing out detention meant that she, too, would have to rise at the crack of dawn. It was the first time the newly appointed prefect had caught a troublemaker red-handed — she had come across a young Gryffindor, Laura, practicing her spellcasting in the Abandoned Toilets long past curfew — and so the Ravenclaw was of course eager to use her newly gained authority. Handing out detention now seemed to be nothing but a detriment to both the detentioner and detentionee; a pointless waste of time much better spent elsewhere for both parties. Rule-breaking was costly, the brunette had ascertained, to all who were involved: the rule-breaker, the rule-enforcer, and anybody that the rule-breaking harmed. Becoming a prefect had bestowed upon her the novel perspective that rules were in place for a reason.

She thus now found herself lugging a heavy bucket full of soapy water that sloshed from side to side, threatening to spill over the bucket's sides and onto the stone floor. The bucket was carried to the very toilets in which Ebony had found the miscreant, along with a plethora of scrubs and sponges of different sizes to be chosen from. The materials rendered the nature of the punishment clear — cleaning, but in the Muggle way. Every wizard's nightmare. The Ravenclaw shuddered at the thought of having to clean without magic, but of course, she was not the one doing the cleaning.

She would greet Laura with nothing but a brief nod and a flat-voiced explanation of what the girl was to spend the following hours painstakingly doing. "Since you were so eager to spend time in these abandoned bathrooms, you will be cleaning them. They must be spotless before you will be allowed to leave," Ebony said, though she was slightly worried that the request was impossible — it was probable that these bathrooms had not been cleaned in decades. "Oh, and your wand please. You are to do this without magic."
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@Laura Büttner
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abandoned toilets.
sep 03, 2026.
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iNPC: Luuk Tjin-A-Wing
sta 7 | eva 12 | str 15 | wis 9 | arc 8 | acc 15
𝐓𝐏 • 𝐟𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐲 • 𝐨𝐛𝐧𝐨𝐱𝐢𝐨𝐮𝐬𝐥𝐲 𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐧𝐠 • 𝐫𝐞𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐝 • 𝐄𝐌

Dirt and Grime pv | detention
Laura was really annoyed about herself getting caught Red handed. She did not know what the punishment would be but it was probably gonna be really bad. After all she had broken quite a few rules. And it was at the break of dawn. Laura was not exactly a morning girl she liked sleeping in and just lying in bed reading after she woke up. But sometimes she was a morning person like when something exciting or nice happened but this definitely was probably the opposite of fun exciting or nice. Anyways Laura stod up and yawned a very big yawn. Hopefully no one would ask questions. She put on her robes and took her wand put it into her pocket and left. She stomped down the stairs to the common room. She really still wanted to warm herself up by the fire but no she had to come early. It was chilly outside in the castle. Laura made her way to the abandoned toilets where the detention would be held. All the way down she wondered what the punishment would be. Hopefully something easy. When she arrived at the abandoned toilets she went in and saw the ravenclaw prefect there looking annoyed at being there so early and looking extremely tired. She explained Laura what to do. Laura would be cleaning the abandoned toilets till they were clean the Muggle way. The ravenclaw prefect who's name Laura had found out from one of the other students was Ebony asked for her wand. For one moment she thought about lying to her but then she decided to give her the wand otherwise she might get into even more trouble. Laura reluctantly handed her wand over. She really did not want to let go. She got have got a grip on the vine leaves pattern and pulled it back but she obediently let go. She went on her knees and took a sponge she dunked it in the soapy water and started scrubbing the wall. The Greece and stains would just not come off. Oh come on now thought Laura. Well looks like I'll stay here forever. Laura scrubbed and scrubbed she tried everywhere nothing would come off. Finnaly after a bit longer scrubbing she finnaly started getting the gresse and dirt off the walls. Her knees were getting very sore of kneeling the whole time. She stood up and her legs felt weak. But she continued anyways. Laura felt like vomiting and she felt really sick at the end. But when she was finished a wave of relief came over her she still felt weak and bad. But who cares. I can't anymore can I go she asked the prefect she hoped she would not be to strict. Her tummy rumbled loudly at that moment.

A smile is the best makeup any girl can wear. -Marilyn Monroe

Dirt and Grime pv | detention
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The troublemaker handed her wand over most hesitantly, fingers curled longingly around its grip as she placed it in Ebony’s hand. The prefect understood the excruciating pain of parting with one’s wand, for it made for such an essential part of a wizard’s essence — it was what every student at Hogwarts depended on. A wizard without a wand was almost dehumanised in some form, as though stripped of one’s identity, for the wand served as an extension of the self. Perhaps that stripping of identity was a part of the punishment, Ebony decided, as she watched Laura kneel and begin to scrub.

As hours seemed to inch by with agonising slowness, Ebony almost felt some semblance of sympathy for the Gryffindor. She appeared almost sickly, rendered a mere ghostly apparition of the girl she was a few hours ago. The endless scrubbing and picking and scraping was indeed laborious — was this how Muggles cleaned everything? The pure-blood could not begin to imagine life without scourgify. She had never touched a sponge, and absolutely did not intend on beginning, especially after witnessing the extent of Laura's manual labour.

Laura, to Ebony, sounded as though she was about to collapse before her as she requested to leave — her exact words being I can’t anymore. Though the walls around clearly still held antiquated stains, likely from the ancient times, it seemed considerably cleaner than the state they had found it in this morning. She nodded at the detentionee and waved her hand to dismiss her and returning the wand. “Alright, you may leave. I hope this has taught you to think twice about breaking rules that exist for a reason.”
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@Laura Büttner
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abandoned toilets.
sep 03, 2026.
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This is a detention thread private to @Laura Büttner.
Laura, you have officially been released from detention! Ebony will be leaving the thread unless you request otherwise; owl me if you’d like her to stay in the thread. You may continue to post here if you would like regardless. Feel free to owl me if you have any questions!
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iNPC: Luuk Tjin-A-Wing
sta 7 | eva 12 | str 15 | wis 9 | arc 8 | acc 15
𝐓𝐏 • 𝐟𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐲 • 𝐨𝐛𝐧𝐨𝐱𝐢𝐨𝐮𝐬𝐥𝐲 𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐧𝐠 • 𝐫𝐞𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐝 • 𝐄𝐌

Dirt and Grime pv | detention
Thank goodness the prefect had let her go she grabbed her wand and almost hit the prefect with her hurry her simple trick of painting her face a bit white with the cleaning detergent had worked she heard the pity in the prefects words. Well Laura would probably forget the words from the prefect soon because almost only about 4 days later she would be brewing a potion in the exact same bathroom she had just cleaned. Laura curled her wand around her fingers. " Ah finally I am free and have my pretty wand back hopefully I don't get caught while I am brewing a potion with Lucian. " she thought. Laura did not feel sick at all anymore she happily skipped out and finally took a deep breath of nice clean air. She quickly walked to the common room. She was really hungry at least it was almost lunch time. She said the password to the fat lady and climbed in to the common room. She went to her dormitory and flopped on her bed. She had not slept for a long time now. She really wanted to fly through the air now on a broom but sadly she could not do that.

A smile is the best makeup any girl can wear. -Marilyn Monroe