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Awww! It's so nicely written and I can literally feel the self doubt in her thoughts. Her sadness is very realistically written.
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Thank you!
How about this one?
How about this one?
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Uwuu this is cute
It's well written—!
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I like that it's kinda funny but also pairs it with how Piper feels a bit alone in such a large place. They balance each other out nicely!
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I'd like someone to please review this for me!
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It's very well written! You portray Hikari's feelings very well.
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Thank you!!Ariana Westonfield-Rivera wrote: 22 Jun 2025, 17:26It's very well written! You portray Hikari's feelings very well.
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This is my first solo so i'm looking for some feedback: American Girl
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That is really good, Ellie!!Ellie Randensmith wrote: 23 Jun 2025, 00:02 This is my first solo so i'm looking for some feedback: American Girl
| PC Piper Hart - Slytherin | |
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Sta: x | Eva: x | Str: x | Wis: x | Arc: x | Acc: x |
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Sta: 7 | Eva: 10 | Str: 6 | Wis: 7 | Arc: 7 | Acc: 13 |
Sta: 9 | Eva: 15 | Str: 0 | Wis: 7 | Arc: 5 | Acc: 15 |