Writing Criticism:
That was like... the prettiest peice of writing that felt like poetry ever. It felt peaceful. Or resigned. Phoenix is a beautiful character.
|
|
Writing Criticism:
Can I get ur opinions on this piece?:
Hurt That's Not Just At The Surface [PV: Octavius Bard]
It's still not finished tho
Hurt That's Not Just At The Surface [PV: Octavius Bard]
It's still not finished tho
Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris to the Ground. Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris, ashes now.
❀ Crimson Sugar Curiosities! ❀ [OPEN!]
Writing Criticism:
It's beautiful but what did you do to her? They don't need to have trauma to be interesting. poor thingNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 01:01 Can I get ur opinions on this piece?:
Hurt That's Not Just At The Surface [PV: Octavius Bard]
It's still not finished tho
|
|
Writing Criticism:
Lol, she bashed her knees after the first part I'm so numb I can't feel you there, it's in this chat if you want to read so yeah heheGraci Laren wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 01:14It's beautiful but what did you do to her? They don't need to have trauma to be interesting. poor thingNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 01:01 Can I get ur opinions on this piece?:
Hurt That's Not Just At The Surface [PV: Octavius Bard]
It's still not finished tho
Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris to the Ground. Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris, ashes now.
❀ Crimson Sugar Curiosities! ❀ [OPEN!]
Writing Criticism:
I did read that. I'll have to read it again though. Your writing is beautiful.Nyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 01:15Lol, she bashed her knees after the first part I'm so numb I can't feel you there, it's in this chat if you want to read so yeah heheGraci Laren wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 01:14It's beautiful but what did you do to her? They don't need to have trauma to be interesting. poor thingNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 01:01 Can I get ur opinions on this piece?:
Hurt That's Not Just At The Surface [PV: Octavius Bard]
It's still not finished tho
|
|
Writing Criticism:
Thank you!!!!Graci Laren wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 01:16I did read that. I'll have to read it again though. Your writing is beautiful.Nyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 01:15Lol, she bashed her knees after the first part I'm so numb I can't feel you there, it's in this chat if you want to read so yeah heheGraci Laren wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 01:14It's beautiful but what did you do to her? They don't need to have trauma to be interesting. poor thingNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 01:01 Can I get ur opinions on this piece?:
Hurt That's Not Just At The Surface [PV: Octavius Bard]
It's still not finished tho
I love urs 2 tho.
Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris to the Ground. Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris, ashes now.
❀ Crimson Sugar Curiosities! ❀ [OPEN!]
Writing Criticism:
Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris to the Ground. Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris, ashes now.
❀ Crimson Sugar Curiosities! ❀ [OPEN!]
Writing Criticism:
Read it and it’s great!
| 𝓗𝓪𝔃𝓮𝓵 𝓝𝓮𝓵𝓼𝓸𝓷 𝓓𝓸𝓷𝓪𝓽𝓲𝓸𝓷𝓼 𝓝𝓮𝓮𝓭𝓮𝓭 𝓪𝓽: 𝓟𝓸𝓽𝓪𝓽𝓸 𝓟𝓮𝓮𝓵 |
𝓞𝓻𝓭𝓮𝓻𝓼 𝓝𝓮𝓮𝓭𝓮𝓭 𝓪𝓽: 𝕊𝕥𝕒𝕥𝕤: 𝕊𝕥𝕒 𝟟| 𝔼𝕧𝕒 𝟞| 𝕊𝕥𝕣 𝟝| 𝕎𝕚𝕤 𝟠| 𝔸ℙ 𝟟| 𝔸𝕔𝕔 𝟟| 𝓑𝓮𝓷𝓮𝓪𝓽𝓱 𝓽𝓱𝓮 𝓜𝓸𝓸𝓷𝓵𝓪𝓬𝓮 |
𝓑𝓻𝓮𝓮 𝓖𝓻𝓮𝔂 𝓓𝓸𝓷𝓪𝓽𝓲𝓸𝓷𝓼 𝓝𝓮𝓮𝓭𝓮𝓭 𝓪𝓽: 𝓲𝓝𝓟𝓒 𝓓𝓸𝓷𝓪𝓽𝓲𝓸𝓷𝓼 |
Phoenix Zhang
Writing Criticism:
I just read it and my GOSH. Why did I not read that sooner? Honestly I shouldn't have expected less from your writing. It just keeps getting more and more wonderful.
|
|