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Elena Clark wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:32 guys i'm actually going to break down
my index got refused again

wait really? they're bein real picky huh

Prat Pass wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:33

Elena Clark wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:32 guys i'm actually going to break down
my index got refused again

why now?

1) this was a mistake on my part, I should have said Second Wizarding War, rather than just the Wizarding War when I mentioned the war occurred 25 years ago. Please modify or remove this mention as the timeline does not currently work since Elena was not born 25 years ago.

2) The second is in regard to the nature of your plot. It’s a bit too grand (or seems that way with how it’s currently written). We ask that players not create plots that require other players to have knowledge of the plot so they don’t seem ignorant. A new threat to the Wizarding World would be something those in the Wizarding World would need to be aware of or they would seem ignorant.

im gonna cry
im going to change her whole story bruh like her dad just left or smthg

Elena Clark wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:34

Prat Pass wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:33

Elena Clark wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:32 guys i'm actually going to break down
my index got refused again

why now?

1) this was a mistake on my part, I should have said Second Wizarding War, rather than just the Wizarding War when I mentioned the war occurred 25 years ago. Please modify or remove this mention as the timeline does not currently work since Elena was not born 25 years ago.

2) The second is in regard to the nature of your plot. It’s a bit too grand (or seems that way with how it’s currently written). We ask that players not create plots that require other players to have knowledge of the plot so they don’t seem ignorant. A new threat to the Wizarding World would be something those in the Wizarding World would need to be aware of or they would seem ignorant.

im gonna cry
im going to change her whole story bruh like her dad just left or smthg

that's crazy. the whole 25 years ago thing was your dad, not you, right? its pretty clear, at least to me

Elena Clark wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:34

Prat Pass wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:33

Elena Clark wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:32 guys i'm actually going to break down
my index got refused again

why now?

1) this was a mistake on my part, I should have said Second Wizarding War, rather than just the Wizarding War when I mentioned the war occurred 25 years ago. Please modify or remove this mention as the timeline does not currently work since Elena was not born 25 years ago.

2) The second is in regard to the nature of your plot. It’s a bit too grand (or seems that way with how it’s currently written). We ask that players not create plots that require other players to have knowledge of the plot so they don’t seem ignorant. A new threat to the Wizarding World would be something those in the Wizarding World would need to be aware of or they would seem ignorant.

im gonna cry
im going to change her whole story bruh like her dad just left or smthg

Her dad left because he didn't want to raise elena

Now elena lives her life aiming to find her father wanting to know why he abandoned her and her mum

Prat Pass wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:36

Elena Clark wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:34

Prat Pass wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:33

Elena Clark wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:32 guys i'm actually going to break down
my index got refused again

why now?

1) this was a mistake on my part, I should have said Second Wizarding War, rather than just the Wizarding War when I mentioned the war occurred 25 years ago. Please modify or remove this mention as the timeline does not currently work since Elena was not born 25 years ago.

2) The second is in regard to the nature of your plot. It’s a bit too grand (or seems that way with how it’s currently written). We ask that players not create plots that require other players to have knowledge of the plot so they don’t seem ignorant. A new threat to the Wizarding World would be something those in the Wizarding World would need to be aware of or they would seem ignorant.

im gonna cry
im going to change her whole story bruh like her dad just left or smthg

Her dad left because he didn't want to raise elena

Now elena lives her life aiming to find her father wanting to know why he abandoned her and her mum

oooo smart

good job. have a cookie

i didn't want her dad to be the bad guy TT
my girl got daddy issues now bruh
that is so messed up like i can't stick to the thing i made because they want details on how he was killed

1) this was a mistake on my part, I should have said Second Wizarding War, rather than just the Wizarding War when I mentioned the war occurred 25 years ago. Please modify or remove this mention as the timeline does not currently work since Elena was not born 25 years ago.

2) The second is in regard to the nature of your plot. It’s a bit too grand (or seems that way with how it’s currently written). We ask that players not create plots that require other players to have knowledge of the plot so they don’t seem ignorant. A new threat to the Wizarding World would be something those in the Wizarding World would need to be aware of or they would seem ignorant.

im gonna cry
im going to change her whole story bruh like her dad just left or smthg
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You have to finish today. Applications close Today and if you are not indexed, you can’t move on to Year 2. So HURRY!

so i just change her whole story, making her dad an a-hole ?
(i'm restarting as a year one in september)

Elena Clark wrote: 30 Jun 2024, 19:38 i didn't want her dad to be the bad guy TT
my girl got daddy issues now bruh
that is so messed up like i can't stick to the thing i made because they want details on how he was killed

tbh your fault for making the lore so grand

they specifically told not to write your character as if it is some messiah or chosen one but rather just kids in school.

HER DAD JUST DIED ON A MISSION she's no messiah