Not Enough Reading Open Closed

She looked up, Oh hi, she said taking one glance at him she noticed he was a gryffindor she thought it was weird that a Gryffindor was talking to her, what's your name, she asked waiting for an answer she groaned her stomach she was starting to feel sick now. Um, I have a pretty bad stomach ache but other then that I think I'm fine right now, she said a little drowsily. She got up quickly and found a book and picked it up and started to read, Oh I didn't mean to be rude, she said realizing what she was doing I wanted to do a bit of reading before my class and I have 35 more minutes until my next class I'm sorry if I was a bit rude I didn't mean to worried: She looked at Grayson with curiosity umm do you have a class you need you to go to? I have Transfiguration next after 35 minutes, she said looking at him worried that she might have said something wrong and offended him by accident she wanted to say sorry for some reason and thought that she didn't have to and thought that her stomach was a bit wrong and thought that she better say that she had a bad stomach ache.
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Not Enough Reading Open Closed
Carina sat on the floor, books surrounded her in an uncomely fashion. She was too engrossed to really notice Peeves—though he was still annoying enough for her to groaned sometimes. Although she did like to read, sometimes, she wasn't here to do that; she was here to find a book. Scouring through the many tomes, her legs had long began to ache from the constant position she was sitting in, but she was too focused to notice. It was when she fidgeted that all the pain came and she groaned in agony.

“La mia gamba!” she cried, but it wasn't very audible, since she self-consciously lowered it on behalf of the nearby library inhabitants. Her legs had fallen asleep and they stung, but she readjusted them anyway, curling up them to her chest.

Resting her chin on her knees, Carina threw yet another book to the side. All of them pertained to the Dark Arts. Was that strange? Possibly, yes. Did she care? Not really, no. Well, actually she did, but for a reason one would thing a little first year like her would use. She looked so innocent,l on her Gryffindor uniform, which consisted of a dark a sweater accented in red, shorts that came to her knees, white knee-high socks, and black shoes. Her short dark hair came to her chin, her eyes set with crystal blue eyes that seemed to gazed at everything with wonder and excitement.

Now, what was she doing? She wouldn't tell so freely, but she might need help.

Carina got up, picking dust off her pants as she walked with her gangly legs towards the table arrangements. Immerging from one of the aisles, she looked right and left, then around at the people. It wasn't too crowded. There were mostly Gryffindors and Ravenclaws, some lingering Slytherins around. She remembered seeing Hufflepuffs too.

She settled on asking someone closeby. Carina was walking, clutching her hands with an eager little grin on her face, when she noticed another pile of books. She wasn't the only bookworm, then? That was a relief. She parted her lips to say something, then she noticed that this girl seemed to be in pain.

Automatically Carina felt bad, even though she had absolutely nothing to do with her ailment. She was just very sympathetic when people weren't alright.

There was someone already with her, who seemed to share the same sympathy, but Carina felt like staying. Stepping towards them, she asked, “Are you alright?” She reached her hand to touch her shoulder but at the last minute she stuffed it into her pocket. She remembered from a previous incident how some people felt about being touched.
Translation:
My leg!

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Not Enough Reading Open Closed
Oh I think I'm fine but I have a pretty BAD stomach ache I think I might be hungry but at this point, I don't think so, I'm Eli what's your name? She thought that it was nice that a Gryffindor came to say are you alright because she only had two friends, Books, and another Ravenclaw, Eli said, Thank you though. And then looked at the clock and gasped oh no I have Transfiguration in 5 minutes time and I can't be late I'm sorry but I have to run! Nice meeting you, she said while walking fast out of the library and then ran out and into the corridor. when she ran she thought she better stop and walk because she didn't what any teachers to get mad at her and lose points so she stopped and walked quickly out of a corridor up some stairs and went into several short cuts and went up many more stairs, she thought she better hurry up she didn't want to be late for this class, she walked quickly thru some classes, she arrived in an empty classroom what she thought, she looked at the clock it was 9:00 oh no her class was at 11:00 a.m she must have been really out of it but at this time she walked back to the library a bit annoyed how could she be so stupid. When she got there she noticed that the girl was in pain, are you alright?