Beauty in the shining light
Task 1 - Make a Plan
Introduction
The main character is a girl Iliana who has a younger sister Rosy. Iliana, always positive, spends a lot of time with friends, dreams about being a doctor. It seems to be a really happy family on the first sight, but is it so? Maybe some of them are faking happiness? Do you know your strength or you feel too weak?
Turning point
Something happens between Iliana and her friends at the moment when she needed them the most. Now, she realized that her friends were with her only because of money. Iliana stopped spending time with them and started to be more alone. Can she find herself again? No one can recognize her now. Rosy saw her sister faking smile before, but now even fake one disappeared. She's worried about her older sister, but can't do anything about it. She's too weak and the only thing she's keeping writing is her "Diary of wishes". Currently the last sentence there is a question. "Will I see my sis' smiling before it's too late?"
Middle part
By some circumstances, Rosy starts to feel worse and Iliana understands that she has to find some way to collect herself again. She learns to rely on herself and searches for a light that could shine for her and Rosy. She meets an old man who tells her that once she'll stop searching around and will instead see inside, she'll find every answer, she'll find strength that whole this time was inside of her. Finally, been able to notice it, Iliana understands how strong she is and finds what truly can cause her smile. Even in everything she's facing, her little sister is still trying to smile. So now it's time for her to make Rosy happier.
Ending part
Rosy has a list of things she really wants to do and now, finally, after seeing her sister truly happy, she's ready to share this list with her. Girls are living their lives fully and now truly happy, no matter what they are facing. Iliana now has new dream- to help others find their own light again.
Conclusion
A story about a girl who lost her fake friends, but found her true happiness and her own light. Will you be able to find your light no matter what you are facing in life? Or will you wait for Iliana to help you to find out how strong you truly are? A story that will teach you about yourself.
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Storyline
Introduction
The main character is a girl Iliana who has a younger sister Rosy. Iliana, always positive, spends a lot of time with friends, dreams about being a doctor. It seems to be a really happy family on the first sight, but is it so? Maybe some of them are faking happiness? Do you know your strength or you feel too weak?
Turning point
Something happens between Iliana and her friends at the moment when she needed them the most. Now, she realized that her friends were with her only because of money. Iliana stopped spending time with them and started to be more alone. Can she find herself again? No one can recognize her now. Rosy saw her sister faking smile before, but now even fake one disappeared. She's worried about her older sister, but can't do anything about it. She's too weak and the only thing she's keeping writing is her "Diary of wishes". Currently the last sentence there is a question. "Will I see my sis' smiling before it's too late?"
Middle part
By some circumstances, Rosy starts to feel worse and Iliana understands that she has to find some way to collect herself again. She learns to rely on herself and searches for a light that could shine for her and Rosy. She meets an old man who tells her that once she'll stop searching around and will instead see inside, she'll find every answer, she'll find strength that whole this time was inside of her. Finally, been able to notice it, Iliana understands how strong she is and finds what truly can cause her smile. Even in everything she's facing, her little sister is still trying to smile. So now it's time for her to make Rosy happier.
Ending part
Rosy has a list of things she really wants to do and now, finally, after seeing her sister truly happy, she's ready to share this list with her. Girls are living their lives fully and now truly happy, no matter what they are facing. Iliana now has new dream- to help others find their own light again.
Conclusion
A story about a girl who lost her fake friends, but found her true happiness and her own light. Will you be able to find your light no matter what you are facing in life? Or will you wait for Iliana to help you to find out how strong you truly are? A story that will teach you about yourself.
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What ideas do you have? Think about organising them in some way so they create a coherent storyline (e.g. a synopsis, a timeline, etc). There are a few different structures you can use to help with planning, Freytag's Pyramid and The Hero's Journey being some of the more well-known ones, but you don't have to use those if you have another you think fits your storyline better.
[Word Count minimum: 400 words | Rewards: 2 HP]
[Word Count minimum: 400 words | Rewards: 2 HP]
Last edited by Linda Ramirez on 30 Oct 2023, 20:32, edited 3 times in total.
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Beauty in the shining light
Main character setting
Iliana was born in the small city in Switzerland. She was lively and outgoing person until something changed her. Iliana never told anyone what was the reason for her sudden change, but she became quiet and stopped talking to her friends.
Iliana was a 12 year old girl with brown natural hair with dyed ends in red and purple. Her eyes had two colors, going from brown to mix between blue and green.
She had younger sister, Rosy, and she cared about her a lot. Her parents were great people, those who were always called 'perfect couple' and 'perfect family'. They all seemed to be happy and so close to each other. And Iliana loved her family really much. She could trust them almost anything, until one day.
She liked to walk with her friends most of the time. Easygoing, always positive girl was making everyone wondering, how is it possible to be so happy? Iliana keeps staying motivated in trying her best to achieve her dreams. She wants to be a doctor who can help those who are very sick. The girl wishes the most for her little sister to be happy and healthy.
Due to some events, Iliana became extremely disappointed in the idea of having friends. She is searching new way to keep herself together and during some time discovering how strong she really is. So, why search for a light somewhere outside if she has it inside?
Everyone has there own light inside themselves. However, because of different life situations, some people can't see it as bright as they used to. Those are in need of help to guide them to see the light again. Iliana knows perfectly well that she can't save her sister. But in this she found a way to shine for her and make her really happy.
With this new discovery Iliana changed her dream a little. Now she wants to help others to find the light inside again. Rosy became happy to see her sister find herself again. In her memories it was the first time
when Iliana was truly happy.
Now Rosy made a list of things she wanted to do and just now she was ready to share it with her sister. Iliana decided to do everything she can to make the list filled with new memories for both sisters. Will she be able to do it? How much people will she help to find light again?
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Task 2 - Create a Character/Setting
Who do you want to be in your story? Where do you want it to be set? You have a choice of either developing a character for your story or the setting of your story (or both if you can), but I'd like to see as much detail as possible for either. If you are creating a character, you can describe their appearance, their backstory, any strengths or weaknesses or character flaws, their motivations and maybe even why they are significant to the plot. If you are creating a setting, you can develop the area's history, describe its current appearance, mention any significant characters that are located there and again include the location's significance to the plot.
[Word Count minimum: 400 words for either character or setting (not both) | Rewards: 1 HP for 1 completed, 2 HP for both completed]
Who do you want to be in your story? Where do you want it to be set? You have a choice of either developing a character for your story or the setting of your story (or both if you can), but I'd like to see as much detail as possible for either. If you are creating a character, you can describe their appearance, their backstory, any strengths or weaknesses or character flaws, their motivations and maybe even why they are significant to the plot. If you are creating a setting, you can develop the area's history, describe its current appearance, mention any significant characters that are located there and again include the location's significance to the plot.
[Word Count minimum: 400 words for either character or setting (not both) | Rewards: 1 HP for 1 completed, 2 HP for both completed]
Last edited by Linda Ramirez on 30 Oct 2023, 18:27, edited 2 times in total.
Will is able to change even the lines on our palms
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Beauty in the shining light
Schedule/ Task 3
- Every week I will add more development in a story, starting with character and setting, continuing with character development.
- Mostly I will work on it from Sunday to first half of Thursday, so I plan to write approximately 2,380 words in a day, plus minus more or less, depending on the story I will be working on at the moment.
- At the end, I hope to make it as one big complete story, that will make sense and will have character development through different aspects of life. Hopefully, it will bare a great useful advice for anyone who would read it.
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Task 3 - Make a schedule
How often will you be able to work on your story? Set a daily/weekly goal to reach, and hopefully it can help to motivate you, or make it seem easier to complete 50,000 words in November. To reach 50,000 words, you will need to do at least 1670 words per day, or 12,500 words per week, but you are welcome to create a schedule that fits your availability.
[Optional]
How often will you be able to work on your story? Set a daily/weekly goal to reach, and hopefully it can help to motivate you, or make it seem easier to complete 50,000 words in November. To reach 50,000 words, you will need to do at least 1670 words per day, or 12,500 words per week, but you are welcome to create a schedule that fits your availability.
[Optional]
Will is able to change even the lines on our palms
| ✮Célestine de la Croix-Valmer✮ - staff account | -ˏˋ ★ ˎˊ-Kaya Rose Bennett-ˏˋ ★ ˎˊ- - first iNPC account | Ryusei Ishikawa - new iNPC |