Candace Dykstra
6 Jan 2021, 19:56
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@Paisley Brown In 5th grd I was a Grammar perfectionist. My class was making a book about Scary stories, and I was correcting everyone so the story would be perfect. I looked at the book a few days ago, and guess what. My story had 50 mistakes. It was so cringey, and there were so many plot holes. I remembered It was such a good story.
Believe me. (And in 4th grd (My teachers are always saying im an angel to their writing classes) my teacher was telling me I was the best writer
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Candace Dykstra
6 Jan 2021, 19:58
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Everyone has bad feelings about themselves, the best thing to do is to ignore it and MOVE ON!
6 Jan 2021, 19:59
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Meh. Im soooo much better at it now. Practice makes practice makes practice makes still failing
6 Jan 2021, 20:06
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@Eliza Corrids Well, you said that was in 5th grade? Here's a little something I wrote in 5th gradeReducioI turned it into my first ever story and gave it to my friend. Looking back on it, there are a lot of grammar mistakes and other plot errors, but that's just what you'd expect from 5th grade me. Don't put the expectations of the present on your past self! Everything you wrote was perfect for the grade or age you were in. Really!Hazel Leaflight looked around her room. She saw what she’d always seen, ever since she was very little and she was forced to live with her Grandmother and Grandfather. There were books and blankets and pillows on the bed with lots of random pencils stuck everywhere.
Edit: I forgot to mention the title of the chapter. It was "The Start and Stuff"
"Making a lark of the misery" - TS
6 Jan 2021, 20:25
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@Paisley Brown Lol the name xD Here's what my story was.
Reducio"Last night I wass bit by a dog. Not just any dog, but a big, hairy dog with rabies. At least, thats what I think it was. BWONK BWONK BWON~ "Honey! Time to get up! You gotta get to school! Ollies coming with you by the way!" "Yes mo~ AH!" I said, looking into the Mirror. There was a girl, just like me! Well, she was me, but with wolf ears. "I-I'm just dreaming! Yeah!"
The bus was crowded. Everyone was talking about the latest Fidget Spinners and Tofu, for some odd reason.
Later that day, I was sitting in class, bored, when all of a sudden I heard a really weird growling noise, and apparently the rest of the class did to. "Err what was that? Probably just my imagination" The teacher said. I looked around confused.
That's just the first few Paragraphs. I HATE it! Yours is so much better <*^*>
6 Jan 2021, 20:51
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@Eliza Corrids That's actually pretty good! It's not bad at all!
@Paisley Brown Lol I love the name of that chapter!
⋆ You were given this life because you are strong enough to live it⋆
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6 Jan 2021, 21:01
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@Gia Adelard Meh. Check this story out: Eep forgot the link one sec
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Its just the beginning, but I like it so far!
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Its just the beginning, but I like it so far!
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ReducioFailed attempt at a stickman xd
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6 Jan 2021, 21:02
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@Eliza Corrids Lol!
⋆ You were given this life because you are strong enough to live it⋆
Sta 8 ⋆ Eva 6 ⋆ Str 3 ⋆ Wis 7 ⋆ Arc 5 ⋆ Acc 6
Sta 8 ⋆ Eva 6 ⋆ Str 3 ⋆ Wis 7 ⋆ Arc 5 ⋆ Acc 6
6 Jan 2021, 21:04
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Hah
"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. "
-Edgar Allan Poe
"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. "
-Edgar Allan Poe