28 Jun 2024, 00:23
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Phew! I'm back! And the kitchen sink is looking a lot more spacious now 
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28 Jun 2024, 00:24
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28 Jun 2024, 00:25
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Aye aye captain!Odie Goggin wrote: 28 Jun 2024, 00:24 That's good
Also can a few people rate my ency so far? I'm still working on it.
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28 Jun 2024, 00:26
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Thank youEmily Shephard wrote: 28 Jun 2024, 00:25Aye aye captain!Odie Goggin wrote: 28 Jun 2024, 00:24 That's good
Also can a few people rate my ency so far? I'm still working on it.
28 Jun 2024, 00:27
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Ohmigosh I love it Odie! It's so pretty! Heck, how come everyone's Encys look so cool and organised compared to mine
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28 Jun 2024, 00:35
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good morning! 
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28 Jun 2024, 00:35
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Really? Thank you I tried so hard to make it look good, I used a lot of code donations thoughEmily Shephard wrote: 28 Jun 2024, 00:27 Ohmigosh I love it Odie! It's so pretty! Heck, how come everyone's Encys look so cool and organised compared to mine
And what do you mean? Yours is so informational and very cute. I feel like it says "I'm really friendly and smart." Just my opinion though, I feel like it's very informative.
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28 Jun 2024, 00:38
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Aww shucks! I just feel like mine is a bit of a mish-mash - other Encys seem to kind of flow, you know? Mine is a little bit all over the place, like some pages are out of order in mine
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28 Jun 2024, 00:43
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My drabble needs to have 11 words shaved off 
ops and help? Tyvm!!
Possible TW: i swear it is not what it sounds like. you'll get it at the end. it's not anything inappropriate, but i did think of this when i was drafting this thing. anyway, if it's not allowed, just tell me and I'll edit this post to just put a n/a
ops and help? Tyvm!!Possible TW: i swear it is not what it sounds like. you'll get it at the end. it's not anything inappropriate, but i did think of this when i was drafting this thing. anyway, if it's not allowed, just tell me and I'll edit this post to just put a n/a
Reducio
I sink into him. Two become one, and I win the struggle.
It's not hard when it's a shocked human.
I blink slowly, move our alien fingers to wrap around a cup. I shift our facial muscles. The first moments are important, only it isn't my first time.
We drink the orange substance, but no taste.
That's normal. That's fine. It'd be weird if I can taste it after centuries of Fire.
He tries to take over now, but I push him back. Deeper. Make a cage.
He’ll try again, but he’ll never win. Weakling.
Regardless, I'll cherish our time. After all, a human isn't as durable as... As I am.
It's not hard when it's a shocked human.
I blink slowly, move our alien fingers to wrap around a cup. I shift our facial muscles. The first moments are important, only it isn't my first time.
We drink the orange substance, but no taste.
That's normal. That's fine. It'd be weird if I can taste it after centuries of Fire.
He tries to take over now, but I push him back. Deeper. Make a cage.
He’ll try again, but he’ll never win. Weakling.
Regardless, I'll cherish our time. After all, a human isn't as durable as... As I am.
don't expect me to be KINDER, when you're the reason I'm in PIECES
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OOC Pronouns: s/her |
28 Jun 2024, 00:57
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Ooh! Good work so far! And no worries about the TW, I'm a rough n' tough galAyumi Faeri wrote: 28 Jun 2024, 00:43 My drabble needs to have 11 words shaved off
Possible TW: i swear it is not what it sounds like. you'll get it at the end. it's not anything inappropriate, but i did think of this when i was drafting this thing. anyway, if it's not allowed, just tell me and I'll edit this post to just put a n/a
ReducioI sink into him. Two become one, and I win the struggle.
It's not hard when it's a shocked human.
I blink slowly, move our alien fingers to wrap around a cup. I shift our facial muscles. The first moments are important, only it isn't my first time.
We drink the orange substance, but no taste.
That's normal. That's fine. It'd be weird if I can taste it after centuries of Fire.
He tries to take over now, but I push him back. Deeper. Make a cage.
He’ll try again, but he’ll never win. Weakling.
Regardless, I'll cherish our time. After all, a human isn't as durable as... As I am.
- I appreciate it all the same! There's a wee bit of repetition at the end that you can chip off "As". This wee sentence here "move our alien fingers to wrap around a cup", you could try something like this: Our fingers grasp the cylindrical contraption. And a couple of the adverbs can be taken out as well to help reduce your word count. But what you have so far is really good!
These are just my little tweeks but it's entirely up to you how to use them should you wish to
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