Character name (First and last name):
Jaemin Choi
School Year or Adult Level:
First
Does any Profile Card info need changing?
No
Link to the character page:
viewtopic.php?p=1167588#p1167588

Character Statistics:
Stamina - 6
Evasion - 5
Strength - 6
Wisdom - 6
Arcane - 6
Accuracy - 6

Character Backstory:
Prior to coming to Hogwarts, Jaemin was attending a school in London where his teachers said that he was a bright, kind student. At home, he is the oldest child and has a younger sister, Mina, who is 8 years old. His father, Hyunsoo, works as a Magizoologist while his mother, Somin, who is a muggle works as a teacher in a high school. The family also has a pet cat, Pepper, who is grey with black stripes. Jaemin loves to read and draw, he played some sports in school but never had any favorite sport he played. He can sing, although he is a little shy he did enjoy performing. He was always told he was a smart kid and kind by his teachers and his people could describe him as more reserved at first but once he opens up he is funny and loves to have a good time.

First Instance of Magic:
When Jaemin was 8 he was sitting with his sister in their living room, Jaemin drawing and Mina playing with toys. Mina went over to Jaemin and wanted to play with him, offering him one of her dolls. He refused her a couple times but she kept being persistent of wanting to play with her big brother. Annoyed by the constant pestering, he yelled at her to leave him alone and her dolls went flying back, hitting the wall loudly. His parents came in to find him hugging Mina, trying to apologize as she was crying and he tried to explain to them what happened. After sitting down together with his parents, Jaemin learned that he was in fact a wizard

STATUS: Pending, Lesmana, 12 March
Reason for Pending:
1) The backstory should be 220 words at least (we don't count the first instance of magic). Please tell us more about Jaemin. Perhaps you can write more about where and when Jaemin was born, did his father use magic at home (but remember, magic and electricity collide so there will be malfunctioning in electronic things in their house :D), were Jaemin and Mina close? How is his mother feel about magic (but it doesn't mean that his father could show magic to random muggles because there is a statute of secrecy they have to keep)? etc.

Closed - April 27
It has been over a month with no edit. This has been closed. Please make a new application when ready to reapply.

Character name:Mirai Meric

School year:first

Does any profile info need to be changed?
No

link to the character page:Mirai Meric

Character statistics:
Statistics:6
Evasion:5
Strength:7
Wisdom:7
Arc power:5
Accuracy:5

Character Back story:

Mirai is a character with curly hair and greenish eyes and Everyone refer to her as a brave and bold character. Mirai loves adventure as well her family is too supportive to her.when we talk about her family Mirai's mother's name is Mersha and her father's name is Meric.They both are wizard and but there ancestors are not from wizardious clan they were muggles and half blood and Mirai was used to a simple with interference of muggles and half blood and she mostly associate with muggles. She respect them a lot and she know a lot about technology. Her friends too were very supportive. She is brave character who love to face adventure.

First instance of Magic:

When she was 7 we went on a adventurous mountain climbing journey where we went to the top of that mountain and suddenly her leg slipped and fall down then we saw from her hand big torch of light which saved her.Then only we got to know that she underwent wandalism.

STATUS: Pending, Lesmana, 13 March
Reason for Pending:
1. You haven't made your Encyclopedia Page yet. Please make one. This link will lead you on how to make one.
2. Wizards and Muggles have a very different culture. It is also unlikely for purebloods to live in the muggle neighbourhood. Being pureblood also means that there is no traceable muggle heritage or ancestor for many generations. This and this link will lead you to further explanation about blood status.
3. The backstory (without First Instance of Magic) should be at least 220 words. Please tell us more about Mirai. You can tell us about what does Mirai's parents do for living? Is Mirai a single child? How is Mirai's education? Is she homeschooled or in a public school for wizarding children? etc
4. For the First Instance of Magic, how the torch of light could save her? I would suggest changing it into the ground to become softer so Mirai would have a safe landing.

Closed - over a month with no communication.

Character name (First and last name): Yohan Nam
School Year or Adult Level:
Does any Profile Card info need changing?: Change nationality to South Korean
Link to the character page: viewtopic.php?f=169&t=37377
Character Statistics: stamina ◦ 4 | evasion ◦ 5 | strength ◦ 4 | wisdom ◦ 2 | arcane power ◦ 8 | accuracy ◦ 4
Character Backstory: Yohan was raised 98% by his mother Darling Nam, a beautifully delicate but out of touch with reality sort of woman. She has definitely babied, coddled, smothered, and spoiled Yohan beyond belief, but he was her handsome baby boy, so now he's grown up with the "I'm just a baby," mindset beyond his own good, accompanied with a speech impediment that causes his r's and l's to blend, and his s's to sound like shhh's. The other 2% of his upbringing was his father, who implemented never giving up, and shedding few to no tears. A father who drilled into his brain (lovingly while they watered plants, of course) that everyone is someone to be loved.

Yohan hasn't known discomfort economically. Being the only child, he is the center of attention at all times, he has always gotten everything he hasn't asked for- He hasn't had to. His parents were like mind-readers, granting Yohan' every unspoken wish before he even thought it, so yes, he could be considered spoiled. A big house and his mom's undivided attention, but even then, his mother's constant attention still felt lacking, but it was due to her "illness". It rendered her a bit distant at all times. But never mind that, she was Yohan's favorite person and he always carried a little piece of her wherever he went- Like a sweater spritzed (heavily doused) with her most frequently used perfume that smelled like sunshine and porcelain roses. The strong smell gave him headaches, but he would never wash the sweater.
First Instance of Magic: It was summer, and it smelled like it. The earth was freshly tilled and prepped as his father lowered his mother's favorite flowers into the soil, his hands darkened with dirt. He never wore gloves, he hated to be a man truly separated from his labor of being one with the ground humans were pulled from. Sunshine glaring bright white burnt Yohan's pale skin, though his mother lathered him with the strongest sunblock over the counter at a pharmacy could supply.

With his wobbly 4 year old legs, he had wandered away from the porch his mother was sat on, her rocking chair rocking her in a steady rhythm that faded the farther he wandered into the estate's garden. He liked the feel of the sun scorching his skin, leaving freckles over the bridge of his nose and the nape of his soft neck, he liked the feel of grass underneath his toes, it was cool in comparison to the sun and it- Sqquatttt, Yohan froze as a crunch came from underneath his foot, it was definitely not the grass he was frolicking in.

The child slowly lifted his foot, and peered down into the trimmed grass, finding a stomach-twisting surprise. A snail, his favorite thing, shell cracked from his own galloping. Yohan tilted his head, he understood that it's shell was important, but it wasn't until his father had come up behind him, panting from running to find his wandering son, and saw the snail, his own features contorting that he realized it was hurt.

His father had crouched down in his already dirt-tainted khakis to pick the snail up from the grass, examining the damage to the creature's shell done by a wandering Yohan. He sighed, and clucked his tongue- He was upset, Yohan guessed and he took the snail from his father's hands gently with his own little ones, cupping the snail. His father began to protest, but he saw a beautiful sight: His 4 year old son placing a kiss to the snail's broken shell, and the damage being reversed from the peck before his very eyes. A magical boy, his father thought as Yohan placed the snail into the grass once again as though the event of being almost squashed to death didn't transpire. A magical boy.

STATUS: Pending, Lesmana, 13 March
Reason for Pending:
1) Since your character is a half-blood, please tell us which of his parents is magical? It would be better if you also tell us where his family lives: muggle or wizarding neighbourhood?
2) Can you tell us more about what kind of "illness" Yohan's mother's have?
3) Your statistics points is 27 in total while human gets 35 points. Please distribute 8 more points into your stats (here and in your trunk).

Closed - April 27
It has been over a month with no edit. This has been closed. Please make a new application when ready to reapply.

Character name (First and last name): Harry Robertson
School Year or Adult Level: First Year
Does any Profile Card info need changing? No
Link to the character page: viewtopic.php?t=37399
Character Statistics: Strengh: 5, Stamina: 7, Accuracy: 8, Wisdom: 6, Arcane Power: 4, Evasion: 5
Character Special Race/Talent: Parselmouth
Character Backstory: Mom and Dad were both very nice to Harry but Mom left him when he was about 5, he doesn’t know why his mom left. He thinks Mom might be dead. But the truth is that Mom was betrayed by Dad and left. (Dad did magic in front of her. ) She couldn’t do that so she was kind of jealous.He lives with Dad. His Mom is a muggle, his Dad is a wizard.
First Instance of Magic: He played on Dad’s toy broom and loved it, and of course, was really good at it. He wishes to get a new broom for himself, but wasn’t allowed to. He wants to get into the quidditch team. He always watches his Dad do magic around the house after his Mom left, for cooking, cleaning and more. When he is exceptionally happy, his heart glows like a star. This started happening when he was about 3. But it seems like this doesn’t happen anymore these years(like when he reached11), maybe he was never so happy or this just stopped. Dad thinks he’s special because he has that light! He is quite proud.
Trunk:

STATUS: Pending, Aulis, 13th March
Reason for Pending:

• Your encyclopedia is lacking a Trunk post, which is needed in order for you to be indexed; see here for the rules and regulations on coding a Trunk and what you need to have in it.
• Also in your encyclopedia, you need to have the backstory and first instance of magic. You have those here, but they are missing from your encylopedia. You also need to include Harry's age and species in your encyclopedia.
• You have put in your application that your character is a Parselmouth, but you are missing the 500-word minimum application for that specific special talent. See here for how to write a special talent application and please make sure it is included in this post when you update it.
• Your stats currently add up to 35. If you want to be a Parselmouth, which is a special talent, your stats need to add up to 30 as special races/talents get -5 stats than humans. Please either ensure that your stats add up to 30 (if you want to be a Parselmouth) or that you are stated to be only human (if you want your stats to add up to 35).
• Your backstory needs to be 220 words (this does not include the first instance of magic). Yours is currently at 74 words. Please expand more on his backstory, family, home life, hobbies/interests, how he was educated pre-Hogwarts, etc.
• First instances of magic cannot be some kind of special talent, and your heart glowing like a mood ring every time you are happy definitely qualifies as such. First instances of magic are one-time, accidental, and often follow strong emotion; you can read more about the guidelines to writing it here, but examples include randomly creating bubbles, breaking or fixing something when mad or scared, or making something (not your own organ, but an object) glow one time. Please change your first instance of magic to fit within these requirements.
• Please make sure any changes that are made to this post are also made in your encyclopedia (e.g. stats changes, first instance of magic, etc.)

Closed - April 27
It has been over a month with no edit. This has been closed. Please make a new application when ready to reapply.

Character name (First and last name): Angel Lefebvre
School Year or Adult Level: 1st Year
Does any Profile Card info need changing? Change to half-blood instead of pure-blood
Link to the character page: viewtopic.php?p=1169245#p1169245
Character Statistics: Strengh: 4, Stamina: 7, Accuracy: 8, Wisdom: 7, Arcane Power: 4, Evasion: 5
Character Special Race/Talent: None
Character Backstory: Angel is a half-blood, and father, a muggle, passed away when she was very young. She grew up in the old Quebec City with her mother, where she attended muggle school, as one of the reasons her mother married her father was her fascination with them, and she believes Angel should see both worlds. She loved Quebec, and really still considers it her home. The whole city was beautiful to her, from the ancient statues and churches to the modern fountain in front of the City Hall, where she would sit when she was upset. There, Angel met Lucas, another half-blood, and they became best friends. Unfortunately, for her mother's work, they had to move to Cambridge. Angel and Lucas kept in touch by writing letters, and he would visit every summer, and her first occurrence of magic happened with him. They were playing catch with a baseball in the park, and Angel looked away for a second by accident. When she looked back, the ball was about to hit her. However, it seemed to change direction in mid-air, curving off to the side. When Angel's mother heard about this, she was both elated and worried. She knew that Angel would have to attend Hogwarts, and was happy about the great education Angel would receive there, but she had attended Ilvermorny, and was completely unfamiliar with the practices at Hogwarts. Furthermore, Lucas wouldn't be with her, as his first magic occurred in Canada just before he was to come visit Angel. Angel looks forward to her years at Hogwarts and hopes to make some new friends as well as keep in touch with Lucas.
First Instance of Magic: Angel and Lucas were playing catch with a baseball in the park, and Angel accidentally looked away. When she looked back, the ball was about to hit her, but the changed course in mid-air and fell to the ground beside her.

STATUS: Pending, Aulis, 13th March
Reason for Pending:

• You state that Angel and her mother moved to Cambridge, but your profile card says Angel lives in Cantebury (I believe a misspelling of Canterbury). Would you like the admins to change your residence to Cambridge, or would you like to change your backstory to fit Canterbury instead of Cambridge?
• Please explain how Angel's father passed away. (Even if Angel does not know, the staff still need to approve it!)

STATUS: Closed, Lesmana, 26 April
No edits have been made in 30 days.

Character name: Mirada Johnson
School Year or Adult Level: First Year Ravenclaw
Does any Profile Card info need changing?: No
Link to the character page: viewtopic.php?t=37202
Character Statistics:
Stamina: 7
Evasion: 6
Strength: 7
Wisdom: 5
Arcane Power: 4
Accuracy: 6
Character Special Race/Talent: None
Character Backstory: My mother and father met at a London university, where they were both doing a teaching degree. They were married 3 years later, on the 3rd of December.
I was born 5 years later, in a hospital in London. Three months later, we moved to the small village of Whyteleafe, where they both got jobs working at the local primary school, which I started at aged three.
I liked being at school, however I don't like maths or science. My favourite subjects were English, where my teacher was called Mr Lewis, and my absolute favourite subject was P.E (Physical Education).
I was at that school until year six, and I'd never had my parents as my teachers. I made a few friends, Emily and Sophie, who were in the same class as me. We loved sharing our favourite books together, and playing with my pet cat, Socks, a female ginger cat with green eyes and white socks.
As I grew up, I started to look forwards to the time I spent playing games on the kitchen table with my parents. My mum was amazing at games, and always won, but my dad would always help me to play.
In year three, I was a class captain. But in that year, a new girl called Anya joined. She was a bully, stealing all of my friends.
First Instance of Magic: When I was 9, Anya was teasing me about having no friends. I got extremely angry, and froze Anya. She was frozen in place, and was unable to move. The Ministry of Magic had to come in and un-freeze Anya, and memory wipe around five of Anya's friends.
On my 11th birthday, there was a lady talking with my parents. She was telling them that as I was a witch, I could go to a boarding school called Hogwarts, where there would be people to teach me about how to use my magic. My parents said that they wanted me to go to Hogwarts, and I agreed.

STATUS: Pending, Aulis, 13th March
Reason for Pending:

• You state that Mirada's first instance of magic was "freezing" a bully named Anya. Was this with ice/coldness, or did she simply freeze in place, unable to move? Please provide clarification on this factor.

STATUS: Approved, Ruby, March 26

Character name (First and last name): Army Valentine
School Year or Adult Level: 1st year
Does any Profile Card info need changing? nope
Link to the character page: Here
Character Statistics: Stats --> Stamina 5 / Evasion 5 / Strength 7 / Wisdom 7 / Arcane power 5 / Accuracy 6
Character Special Race/Talent: none
Character Backstory: Army had been born in a place called Cambridge, England on the date of ninth of November, 2013. Her parents are from Korean nationality, but then they had moved to england 6 years before she was given birth to. She has an lovable, protective older brother, Andrae ( who is 16 years old). He left for hogwarts four years ago, leaving her feeling sad. But every year, during the summer break, he would bring a special gift for her. He is her best sibling, and she loves him with all her heart. He also used to take care of her and pay attention to her more than her parents would. She also has a younger sister Aspyn, who is 1 years old, who is very naughty and troublesome and sassy(but she is so adorable). Her parents are quite strict, but not extremely overbearing. She has had to live up to their expectations, but it has never been too hard on her. She knew they only cared for her well-being, but sometimes it would get a bit tiring. She lives in a beautiful villa that was in her family for generations. She loves her grandparents from her mothers side more, because they bring her more presents. Her grandfather jokes with her a lot and helps her with her pranks (she is not good at pranking ).

First Instance of Magic: It was a sunny and beautiful day, but Army’s mood was the complete opposite. She had been sitting outside her home in the garden, her back pressed against the wall. she had asked her mother if she could go to a concert, but that had ended up in a big argument. She thought of the argument over and over again, her anger overwhelming her. When she heard a crack.
The windows had zigzaggy lines all over them now, and one was broken.

STATUS: Approved, Lesmana, 14 March

Character name (First and last name): Kostas Woods
School Year or Adult Level: 1st
Does any Profile Card info need changing? No.
Link to the character page: viewtopic.php?t=37439
Character Statistics: [ sta ] 5 [ eva ] 4 [ str ] 10 [ wis ] 4 [ arc ] 7 [ acc ] 5
Character Special Race/Talent: N/A
Character Backstory: Being the child of a dark wizard does bring its fair share of luggage. Kostas was born too a naive mother who glorified and romantizised his father, while forgetting to be a good mother in the process. She was so terribly in love and infatuated with him, that it removed any trace of motherly instincts. The man eventually grew bored of her, and the time between visits grew longer and longer, until he just never came back. Kostas himself had essentially no memory of his father, and while his mother persisted the idea that he would one day come back, that just seemed less and less plausible the older he got. The years went by, and his mother grew more and more erratic, and even developed some sort of resentment for him. He never developed any sort of family relations, and his classmates in muggle school never really dared to get closer too him than absolutely necessary, making him closed off and cold, morally drained and ethically questionable. It's not certain whether he inhabits many emotions beside anger and boredom. The air surrounding him seems colder, but that could just be how he looks at people as well.

Kostas doesn't care for anyone and doesn't mind pointing out his dislike for people, and to humiliate others because he can. To feel something, he usually pulled mean, bordering sadistic pranks on his fellow classmates to entertain himself. He's generally unlikable and doesn't care. He prefers to be disliked, because then he doesn't have to deal with others stupidity.

First Instance of Magic: During a lesson in muggle school at eight years old, Kostas was paired with another student—one of those overly cheerful, optimistic types who always tried to include him, despite his clear disinterest in other kids. She kept talking and trying to be friendly, asking him questions he had no intention of answering. Her persistence annoyed him severely. So much so, that he with grating irritation reached out and took the flower from her that she'd been twirling between her fingers since recess was over. The effect was immediate. As soon as he touched it, the petals darkened, curling inward as if they were suddenly centuries old. The stem turned brittle, brown and crumbled into dust.

The girl screamed, staring from the dead flower to him in shock. Kostas only smirked at the response. He hadn’t meant to do it—not consciously—but seeing the fear in her eyes sent a thrill through him. He had taken something delicate and ruined it with nothing but his touch.

The ministry got involved and had to come an obliviate his classmates, but the rumors lived on. No one could explain why, but from that day on, rumors spread that anything Kostas touched would wither and die. He never cared to correct them.

STATUS: Pending, Melisande, 14th March
Reason for Pending:
Well, there's nothing wrong with what you have here, but I feel I need you to clarify somethings so we can be sure your plot makes sense and you are free to RP it properly.
- Kostas' father is a dark wizard you said. Why is he a dark wizard? What do you mean by dark wizard? What did he do to receive this title?
- What do you mean, Kostas' mother forgot how to be a good mother? What do you mean by that? You said she was very infatuated by Kostas' father, but they ended up divorcing right? Was what I understood, correct me if I'm wrong. So Kostas was living alone with his mother? What did she do for a living? How did they survived alone being she so erratic? How did she show her resentment towards her son?
- Your backstory contains some sensitive topics (nothing wrong with it), I advise you tho, to keep in mind our site rating while writing about them: Site Rating. Having it in mind will help you as a valuable guide to sort out through what you intend to write and how you should do it.

Closed - April 27
It has been over a month with no edit. This has been closed. Please make a new application when ready to reapply.

Character name (First and last name): Vinnie Everest
School Year or Adult Level: 1st Year
Does any Profile Card info need changing? This is name, bloodstatus, nationality, residence: No
Link to the character page: viewtopic.php?f=169&t=37441
Character Statistics: Stamina: 5 | Evasion: 7 | Strength: 7 | Wisdom: 9 | ArcPower: 2 | Accuracy: 5
Character Special Race/Talent: human + Parcelmouth — this character’s grandmother & mother were both parcelmouths which would then make for a great addition to this character as he would be one as well. This would be perfect since he would be inheriting the ability his family have had for generations. He would therefore be able to make use of it to help others and to succeed in his classes, work district and so on and so forth. He would be great for the role of parcelmouth as it is his family members who had the ability previously and would then make it easier to make his character even more developed. He is also very intelligent and would be able to put the intellect of this ability to very good use. He would also be able to help his classmates or anyone else out if they needed help translating something in parceltongue and it would make for his character development to be made so that he can make friends more easily than he used to. He knows how to get things done and knows how things can make others feel. Therefore this ability would be great for him to know to be able to make connections and use of it. I love his character development and style of work and he would be amazing for this. He needs this ability to further his ability to connect with magic and with people. It may make people fear him, but that doesn’t stop him from being himself and being able to express himself in a different way than others. He would be able to make a difference and that would be amazing.
Character Backstory: Vinnie was born in Surrey, England on the of thirteenth of November, 2013. His parents are from England originally, meaning they are from the same country he was born in, making all of them of the English bloodline. He has a lovable, protective older sister, Jade (who is 18 years old). She left for hogwarts six years ago, leaving him feeling sad. But every year, during the summer break, she takes him on a walk through the forest nearby their house. She is his best and most favourite sibling, and he loves her so very much. She also used to take care of him and pay attention to him more than his parents would due to his opinion on blood status and theirs constantly colliding, making his parents avoid him where possible. He also has a younger brother Zander, who is 7 years old, who is very naughty and troublesome and sassy. His parents are strict and extremely overbearing. He has had to live up to their expectations, but it has always been too hard on him. He knew they only cared for the status of the family name, the bloodline and other pure-blood related stuff, but sometimes it would get a bit tiring of hearing the same lecture from his parents over and over again. He lives in a beautiful manor that was in his family since his parents moved in when he was first born.
First Instance of Magic: It was a rainy, stormy and cold night. He was 5 years old and he was in the park, wearing a coat, on the swing set. He was wet and cold. And so was everyone around him. It was pouring down outside and he was enjoying himself when a little girl came up and started teasing him for his parents and questioning him and saying he’s just like his family and comparing him to them. He got so angry with her that a nearby building wall caught fire, she ended up running away and calling him a monster. And his parents never let him hear the end of it

STATUS: Pending, Melisande, 14th March
Reason for Pending:
- To apply for a special race/talent you need to write a 500 word (maximum of 2K word) application describing how this fits your character (as in describe how they exhibit this magical talent or race) and where it came from (example, your grandmother was a Vampire, you had a distant Seer ancestor, etc.). It's not about writing how it would be fun to write your character as a parselmouth and the possibilities it would give you. It's about his family history, explaining why he is a parselmouth. You can read more about this talent here: Link!
- Having a special race or talent leaves your character with 30 point stats instead of 35. Please make the necessary edits.
- Your character's date of birth is wrong on your background story, please change 2013 to 2012.
- Can you tell us a bit more about his parents? What do they do for a living?[
- To be able to approve your encyclopedia, we need you to make a trunk post in it. You can read about it here: Link!

Closed - April 27
It has been over a month with no edit. This has been closed. Please make a new application when ready to reapply.

Character name (First and last name): Isabella Bernard
School Year or Adult Level: First year
Does any Profile Card info need changing? No
Link to the character page: Ency
Character Statistics: stamina 4 evasion 6 strength 6 wisdom 9 arcane power 5 accuracy 5
Character Backstory:

Reducio

Isabella Bernard grew up in a loving, Muggle household in London. Her father, Alexander, a lawyer with a hidden past as a wizard, had left the magical world when he married Amelia, a kind-hearted Muggle teacher. The couple worked hard to create a warm, normal life for their daughter, raising her with values of kindness, responsibility, and hard work.

Isabella had a close relationship with both parents. She loved spending time with her mother, baking and cooking, and would often accompany her father on weekend hikes or to museums, where he nurtured her curiosity. Isabella’s first instance of magic happened at 10 years old during a family gathering. Determined to organize a game, she grew frustrated when older kids ignored her. As she crossed her arms in defiance, their chairs suddenly slid backward, making them stumble to their feet. Everyone froze, while Isabella stood tall, both shocked and triumphant. This moment prompted her father to finally reveal the truth about his wizarding heritage. Isabella had little connection to the wizarding world or her father's side of the family, who disagreed with his decision to leave magic behind, before this.

Before her Hogwarts letter arrived, Isabella attended a local Muggle school, where she excelled academically and socially. Isabella’s life was a blend of ordinary Muggle experiences and the hints of something extraordinary, and when her Hogwarts letter arrived, she felt ready for the adventure that awaited her.

First Instance of Magic:

Reducio

Isabella Bernard’s first instance of magic happened at eleven years old during a family gathering. Determined to organize a game, she grew frustrated when older kids ignored her. As she crossed her arms in defiance, their chairs suddenly slid backward, making them stumble to their feet. Everyone froze, while Isabella stood tall, both shocked and triumphant.

STATUS: Pending, Melisande, 14th March
Reason for Pending:
- As a first year, your character only has 35 stat points, you gave her 36. Please make the necessary edits.
- We need to see in your encyclopedia (character's page) your character's background story and first instance of magic. You can read more about it here: Link!
- You focused her background story on her personality, but what we need to know is how was her life before Hogwarts. You said her father was a lawyer, what about her mother? How was Isabella's relationship with her parents? Did they have any activities that they like to do together? When did Isabella learned about magic? Her father was a wizard, was magic a secret to her before her first instance of magic? How did her family managed to live in the muggle world, being Isabella and her father from the wizarding world? Isabella had no connections with her father's family and the wizarding world? Isabella studied in a muggle school, or was she homeschooled by her parents or tutors? - These are all questions meant to help you develop a little more about her background story instead of a description of her personality, hope they help you!

STATUS: Pending, Melisande, 17th March
Reason for Pending:
First, thank you for the edits you already made, now we can know a bit more about Isabella's life!
- You wrote that her First Instance of Magic happened when she was 10 and the when she was 5. Which one do you wish to keep?
- If they were living in the muggle world, after her First Instance of Magic, the ministry would have to intervene, as muggles can't know about magic (International Statute of Wizarding Secrecy), they would have their memories altered. Please make the edits to reflect this.
- You first say that her father kept his magical background hidden, but then you said that Isabella knew about it, then you contradict this information again, saying that it was her First Instance of Magic that made him reveal his magical heritage. Can you clarify this?

Pending - April 27 Lear
Thank you for your edit. I noticed your FIOM has been edited but now it is marked as both 10 and 11 years old. It can't be 11 anyways, but also we need consistency.

STATUS: Closed, Silas, September 1
User reapplied in July and was approved, just locking this one.