Song composing New Please post

Laurie Holmes wrote: 5 Apr 2026, 11:57 Guys here’s the full song, which I edited a bit, and I love it! Thank you all so much for participating, and I’ll be mentioning all the people who helped write it. Tell me if you think any lyric should be changed~

Reducio

(Verse 1)
Sometimes I remember the days, when it wasn’t so dark,
when it wasn’t so grey,
But I couldn’t have it that way.
Those things could’ve been said in a better way,
Wish I didn’t have to see you fade away.
But, still I’ll remember that one day,
The moment when I saw your face,
And maybe it’s just me hallucinating, but I can’t help but start complaining-

(Prechorus)
Deep inside my hearts still in love, love, love
And leaving you was tough, tough, tough
I didn’t know I could be that rough, rough rough
I’m sorry I wasn’t enough.

(Chorus)
I’m still crying by the window,
My hearts still filled with sorrow.
Reminding me of how I LET YOU DOWN
Always thinking of you made me mad on how I LET YOU DOWN
I wanna say it’s not too late, I wanna say we’re still ok,
But I still let you down…

(Verse 2)
I wish I knew how to go back to when we started,
When I wasn’t so broken-hearted
Maybe I built my walls too high,
For you to come inside,
But now I can’t tear them down.
And I say I’ve tried many times,
To break through the walls of discord,
But then I end up pushing you from a height.
And, maybe it’s just me hallucinating, but i can’t help but start complaining-

(Prechorus)
Deep inside my hearts still in love, love, love
And leaving you was tough, tough, tough
I didn’t know I could be that rough, rough rough
I’m sorry I wasn’t enough.

(Chorus)
I’m still crying by the window,
My hearts still filled with sorrow.
Reminding me of how I LET YOU DOWN
Always thinking of you made me mad on how I LET YOU DOWN
I wanna say it’s not too late, I wanna say we’re still ok,
But I still let you down…

(Bridge)
I thought we were perfect, I guess we weren’t
You tried everything to stop me from getting hurt
I should’ve known every story would come to an end,
Is it too late now to make amends?

(Chorus)
And I’m still crying by the window,
My hearts still filled with sorrow.
Reminding me of how I LET YOU DOWN
Always thinking of you made me mad on how I LET YOU DOWN
I wanna say it’s not too late, I wanna say we’re still ok,
But I still let you down…

Melissa Blake wrote: 5 Apr 2026, 17:42

Laurie Holmes wrote: 5 Apr 2026, 11:57 Guys here’s the full song, which I edited a bit, and I love it! Thank you all so much for participating, and I’ll be mentioning all the people who helped write it. Tell me if you think any lyric should be changed~

Reducio

(Verse 1)
Sometimes I remember the days, when it wasn’t so dark,
when it wasn’t so grey,
But I couldn’t have it that way.
Those things could’ve been said in a better way,
Wish I didn’t have to see you fade away.
But, still I’ll remember that one day,
The moment when I saw your face,
And maybe it’s just me hallucinating, but I can’t help but start complaining-

(Prechorus)
Deep inside my hearts still in love, love, love
And leaving you was tough, tough, tough
I didn’t know I could be that rough, rough rough
I’m sorry I wasn’t enough.

(Chorus)
I’m still crying by the window,
My hearts still filled with sorrow.
Reminding me of how I LET YOU DOWN
Always thinking of you made me mad on how I LET YOU DOWN
I wanna say it’s not too late, I wanna say we’re still ok,
But I still let you down…

(Verse 2)
I wish I knew how to go back to when we started,
When I wasn’t so broken-hearted
Maybe I built my walls too high,
For you to come inside,
But now I can’t tear them down.
And I say I’ve tried many times,
To break through the walls of discord,
But then I end up pushing you from a height.
And, maybe it’s just me hallucinating, but i can’t help but start complaining-

(Prechorus)
Deep inside my hearts still in love, love, love
And leaving you was tough, tough, tough
I didn’t know I could be that rough, rough rough
I’m sorry I wasn’t enough.

(Chorus)
I’m still crying by the window,
My hearts still filled with sorrow.
Reminding me of how I LET YOU DOWN
Always thinking of you made me mad on how I LET YOU DOWN
I wanna say it’s not too late, I wanna say we’re still ok,
But I still let you down…

(Bridge)
I thought we were perfect, I guess we weren’t
You tried everything to stop me from getting hurt
I should’ve known every story would come to an end,
Is it too late now to make amends?

(Chorus)
And I’m still crying by the window,
My hearts still filled with sorrow.
Reminding me of how I LET YOU DOWN
Always thinking of you made me mad on how I LET YOU DOWN
I wanna say it’s not too late, I wanna say we’re still ok,
But I still let you down…

It's beautiful!