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I JUST READ IT AND CAME HERE IMMEDIATELY AFTER TO TELL YOU HOW AMAZINGLY TALENTED YOU ARE!!!Cassandra Tarot wrote: 11 May 2026, 03:02 hello dudes, dudethems, and dudettes
just posted a poem i had written for class, I'm open to criticism and suggestions to improve :]
The only thing I do have is it was a tiny bit redundant, but that also could have been an intentional choice. That’s is some really good poetry, like stuff they would have us study in English class. It reminded me of lord of the flies
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thank you so much!Kennedy Cheek wrote: 11 May 2026, 11:50I JUST READ IT AND CAME HERE IMMEDIATELY AFTER TO TELL YOU HOW AMAZINGLY TALENTED YOU ARE!!!Cassandra Tarot wrote: 11 May 2026, 03:02 hello dudes, dudethems, and dudettes
just posted a poem i had written for class, I'm open to criticism and suggestions to improve :]
The only thing I do have is it was a tiny bit redundant, but that also could have been an intentional choice. That’s is some really good poetry, like stuff they would have us study in English class. It reminded me of lord of the flies
Yeah, I had a feeling it was, it's something I'm working on so thank you for your honest feedback!!!
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Hi, just carved my heart open after weeks of no writing. It sucks, but I needed to take that one out.
"I was good. I was really good"
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Just posted my first poem here and one of the first complete poems I've written! it's more of slice of my mind recently so YEAH
I have no news. I live quietly. I love you and I wait
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That did not suck!! It was AMAZINGMikaela Hendricks wrote: 25 May 2026, 17:42 Hi, just carved my heart open after weeks of no writing. It sucks, but I needed to take that one out.
| My Ency | ☆ 𝕂𝕖𝕟𝕟𝕖𝕕𝕪 ℂ𝕙𝕖𝕖𝕜 ☆ “She was a sunshine girl who was learning to play in the rain.” |
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