SONG I: 
I heard your voice in my ear
The worlds 'I love you' and I looked over
There you were, with some other girl
I stood there crying,
My heart was dying, you had broke me and left.
The worlds 'I love you' and I looked over
There you were, with some other girl
I stood there crying,
My heart was dying, you had broke me and left.
SONG I:
Okay, so will that be... the first verse? If yes, then we can put all our ideas together and make the first song!!!!!!Ellie Randensmith wrote: 23 Sep 2025, 18:14 I heard your voice in my ear
The worlds 'I love you' and I looked over
There you were, with some other girl
I stood there crying,
My heart was dying, you had broke me and left.
SONG I:
So what about:
What do you think? Idk my bits just sound weird
@Ellie Randensmith
@Vivi Grace
@Emily Harris
Reducio
I heard your voice in my ear
The words 'I love you' and I looked over
There you were, with some other girl
I stood there crying,
My heart was dying, you had broke me and left.
The sky is bright,
As you once were.
Come here tonight,
And listen to these words: (To these words)
My heart is broken,
But you now fear me.
Come to me once more
Before you disagree!
Come close to me now,
Show me all you have. (All... you... have.)
We'll split it for two,
But you'll still have both halves.
My heart is broken,
But you now fear me.
Come to me once more
Before you disagree!
Come closer, right now,
What make you so scared?
You believe I'm a monster,
With enormous teeth bared?
I am no monster,
I'm just a girl,
So come closer, to me now (To... me... now)
We'll watch out story unfurl?
The other girl's still there,
Hanging around,
You look at me,
Not moving, as if you were bound?
I am no monster,
I'm just a girl,
So come closer, to me now (To... me... now)
We'll watch out story unfurl?
[CLOSING; really quiet by the end]
My heart is broken,
But you now fear me.
Leave me alone, now,
Go on, you can finally.. flee.
..To.... her.....
I heard your voice in my ear
The words 'I love you' and I looked over
There you were, with some other girl
I stood there crying,
My heart was dying, you had broke me and left.
The sky is bright,
As you once were.
Come here tonight,
And listen to these words: (To these words)
My heart is broken,
But you now fear me.
Come to me once more
Before you disagree!
Come close to me now,
Show me all you have. (All... you... have.)
We'll split it for two,
But you'll still have both halves.
My heart is broken,
But you now fear me.
Come to me once more
Before you disagree!
Come closer, right now,
What make you so scared?
You believe I'm a monster,
With enormous teeth bared?
I am no monster,
I'm just a girl,
So come closer, to me now (To... me... now)
We'll watch out story unfurl?
The other girl's still there,
Hanging around,
You look at me,
Not moving, as if you were bound?
I am no monster,
I'm just a girl,
So come closer, to me now (To... me... now)
We'll watch out story unfurl?
[CLOSING; really quiet by the end]
My heart is broken,
But you now fear me.
Leave me alone, now,
Go on, you can finally.. flee.
..To.... her.....
What do you think? Idk my bits just sound weird
@Ellie Randensmith
@Vivi Grace
@Emily Harris
SONG I:
@Ellie Randensmith
@Vivi Grace
@Emily Harris
Please read the recent posts and catch up, ty. I'm also owling just in case...
@Vivi Grace
@Emily Harris
Please read the recent posts and catch up, ty. I'm also owling just in case...
SONG I:
Sooo I'll take that as a 'no edits needed'? Idk no one has posted for ages!
Anyway, if so, I'll add the song to Published Pieces.... here's the final copy
@Vivi Grace
@Emily Harris
@Ellie Randensmith
Now if any edits are needed, please say so soon, because I am locking this thread soon! Then in about a week I will make 'song 2'
Anyway, if so, I'll add the song to Published Pieces.... here's the final copy
Mentions:SONG 1: A broken Heart
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Ellie Randensmith
Vivi Grace
Emily Harris
Edith Walkers
Ellie Randensmith
Vivi Grace
Emily Harris
I heard your voice in my ear
The words 'I love you' and I looked over
There you were, with some other girl
I stood there crying,
My heart was dying, you had broke me and left.
The sky is bright,
As you once were.
Come here tonight,
And listen to these words: (To these words)
My heart is broken,
But you now fear me.
Come to me once more
Before you disagree!
Come close to me now,
Show me all you have. (All... you... have.)
We'll split it for two,
But you'll still have both halves.
My heart is broken,
But you now fear me.
Come to me once more
Before you disagree!
Come closer, right now,
What make you so scared?
You believe I'm a monster,
With enormous teeth bared?
I am no monster,
I'm just a girl,
So come closer, to me now (To... me... now)
We'll watch out story unfurl?
The other girl's still there,
Hanging around,
You look at me,
Not moving, as if you were bound?
I am no monster,
I'm just a girl,
So come closer, to me now (To... me... now)
We'll watch out story unfurl?
[CLOSING; really quiet by the end]
My heart is broken,
But you now fear me.
Leave me alone, now,
Go on, you can finally.. flee.
..To.... her.....
@Vivi Grace
@Emily Harris
@Ellie Randensmith
Now if any edits are needed, please say so soon, because I am locking this thread soon! Then in about a week I will make 'song 2'