14 Jul 2025, 05:27
One line song
Pretty soon I'll be pushing up daisies where the sun don't shine
Carving jokes in the dirt just to pass the time,
This whole field, whole world, seems to be mine... and yet,
I still ache for a chance I never did get.
The love that left me all those years ago
Still haunts the hollows where wildflowers grow
Like broken dreams and memories that I just want to forget
Still waitin’ for peace, but I ain’t found it yet.

Whoever posts next should probably start the chorus

PC Piper Hart - Slytherin
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14 Jul 2025, 07:39
One line song
Verse 1
Pretty soon I'll be pushing up daisies where the sun don't shine
Carving jokes in the dirt just to pass the time,
This whole field, whole world, seems to be mine... and yet,
I still ache for a chance I never did get.
The love that left me all those years ago
Still haunts the hollows where wildflowers grow
Like broken dreams and memories that I just want to forget
Still waitin’ for peace, but I ain’t found it yet.

Chorus
I want to leave, to find a better place,

14 Jul 2025, 08:18
One line song
Verse 1
Pretty soon I'll be pushing up daisies where the sun don't shine
Carving jokes in the dirt just to pass the time,
This whole field, whole world, seems to be mine... and yet,
I still ache for a chance I never did get.
The love that left me all those years ago
Still haunts the hollows where wildflowers grow
Like broken dreams and memories that I just want to forget
Still waitin’ for peace, but I ain’t found it yet.

Chorus
I want to leave, to find a better place,
One where the sky stays open and the wind knows my face

PC Piper Hart - Slytherin
Sta: x | Eva: x | Str: x | Wis: x | Arc: x | Acc: x
Sta: x | Eva: x | Str: x | Wis: x | Arc: x | Acc: x

14 Jul 2025, 15:42
One line song
[Verse 1]
Pretty soon I'll be pushing up daisies where the sun don't shine
Carving jokes in the dirt just to pass the time,
This whole field, whole world, seems to be mine... and yet,
I still ache for a chance I never did get.
The love that left me all those years ago
Still haunts the hollows where wildflowers grow
Like broken dreams and memories that I just want to forget
Still waitin’ for peace, but I ain’t found it yet.

[Chorus]
I want to leave, to find a better place,
One where the sky stays open and the wind knows my face
One where the world isn't a race


my song writing skills no

✧-✧-✧They say that words are stronger
than actions but word's can also hurt more✧-✧-✧
ℂ𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝔽𝕝𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣𝕤

14 Jul 2025, 15:48
One line song
[Verse 1]
Pretty soon I'll be pushing up daisies where the sun don't shine
Carving jokes in the dirt just to pass the time,
This whole field, whole world, seems to be mine... and yet,
I still ache for a chance I never did get.
The love that left me all those years ago
Still haunts the hollows where wildflowers grow
Like broken dreams and memories that I just want to forget
Still waitin’ for peace, but I ain’t found it yet.

[Chorus]
I want to leave, to find a better place,
One where the sky stays open and the wind knows my face
One where the world isn't a race
One where I don’t fall from grace

I quite like writing songs but they aren’t very good! Writing songs is basically like writing a poem.
The chorus can be short and we can go to verse 2 or it can be a few more lines?

PC Piper Hart - Slytherin
Sta: x | Eva: x | Str: x | Wis: x | Arc: x | Acc: x
Sta: x | Eva: x | Str: x | Wis: x | Arc: x | Acc: x

14 Jul 2025, 15:54
One line song
[Verse 1]
Pretty soon I'll be pushing up daisies where the sun don't shine
Carving jokes in the dirt just to pass the time,
This whole field, whole world, seems to be mine... and yet,
I still ache for a chance I never did get.
The love that left me all those years ago
Still haunts the hollows where wildflowers grow
Like broken dreams and memories that I just want to forget
Still waitin’ for peace, but I ain’t found it yet.

[Chorus]
I want to leave, to find a better place,
One where the sky stays open and the wind knows my face
One where the world isn't a race
One where I don’t fall from grace

[Verse 2]
That time when you left me and said you'd come back.

what is this country break up song?

✧-✧-✧They say that words are stronger
than actions but word's can also hurt more✧-✧-✧
ℂ𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝔽𝕝𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣𝕤

14 Jul 2025, 15:58
One line song
[Verse 1]
Pretty soon I'll be pushing up daisies where the sun don't shine
Carving jokes in the dirt just to pass the time,
This whole field, whole world, seems to be mine... and yet,
I still ache for a chance I never did get.
The love that left me all those years ago
Still haunts the hollows where wildflowers grow
Like broken dreams and memories that I just want to forget
Still waitin’ for peace, but I ain’t found it yet.

[Chorus]
I want to leave, to find a better place,
One where the sky stays open and the wind knows my face
One where the world isn't a race
One where I don’t fall from grace

[Verse 2]
That time when you left me and said you'd come back.
I counted the stars till I lost track

It’s actually not too bad

PC Piper Hart - Slytherin
Sta: x | Eva: x | Str: x | Wis: x | Arc: x | Acc: x
Sta: x | Eva: x | Str: x | Wis: x | Arc: x | Acc: x

14 Jul 2025, 16:03
One line song
[Verse 1]
Pretty soon I'll be pushing up daisies where the sun don't shine
Carving jokes in the dirt just to pass the time,
This whole field, whole world, seems to be mine... and yet,
I still ache for a chance I never did get.
The love that left me all those years ago
Still haunts the hollows where wildflowers grow
Like broken dreams and memories that I just want to forget
Still waitin’ for peace, but I ain’t found it yet.

[Chorus]
I want to leave, to find a better place,
One where the sky stays open and the wind knows my face
One where the world isn't a race
One where I don’t fall from grace

[Verse 2]
That time when you left me and said you'd come back.
I counted the stars till I lost track
Laying on my back, but it hurts in my heart

yeah, how long is the song going to be?

✧-✧-✧They say that words are stronger
than actions but word's can also hurt more✧-✧-✧
ℂ𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝔽𝕝𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣𝕤

14 Jul 2025, 16:11
One line song
[Verse 1]
Pretty soon I'll be pushing up daisies where the sun don't shine
Carving jokes in the dirt just to pass the time,
This whole field, whole world, seems to be mine... and yet,
I still ache for a chance I never did get.
The love that left me all those years ago
Still haunts the hollows where wildflowers grow
Like broken dreams and memories that I just want to forget
Still waitin’ for peace, but I ain’t found it yet.

[Chorus]
I want to leave, to find a better place,
One where the sky stays open and the wind knows my face
One where the world isn't a race
One where I don’t fall from grace

[Verse 2]
That time when you left me and said you'd come back.
I counted the stars till I lost track
Laying on my back, but it hurts in my heart
Trying to rebuild what you tore apart

Until we move to the next one I guess. Usually a song has about 3 verses and 2 or more choruses, maybe a bridge, outro, pre chorus, etc.
I was thinking that when the next chorus comes up we just copy down the other one and continue to the next verse. Sound good or?

PC Piper Hart - Slytherin
Sta: x | Eva: x | Str: x | Wis: x | Arc: x | Acc: x
Sta: x | Eva: x | Str: x | Wis: x | Arc: x | Acc: x

14 Jul 2025, 16:13
One line song
[Verse 1]
Pretty soon I'll be pushing up daisies where the sun don't shine
Carving jokes in the dirt just to pass the time,
This whole field, whole world, seems to be mine... and yet,
I still ache for a chance I never did get.
The love that left me all those years ago
Still haunts the hollows where wildflowers grow
Like broken dreams and memories that I just want to forget
Still waitin’ for peace, but I ain’t found it yet.

[Chorus]
I want to leave, to find a better place,
One where the sky stays open and the wind knows my face
One where the world isn't a race
One where I don’t fall from grace

[Verse 2]
That time when you left me and said you'd come back.
I counted the stars till I lost track
Laying on my back, but it hurts in my heart
Trying to rebuild what you tore apart

[Chorus]
I want to leave, to find a better place,
One where the sky stays open and the wind knows my face
One where the world isn't a race
One where I don’t fall from grace

[Verse 3]
When I saw you there that one night

ok!!

✧-✧-✧They say that words are stronger
than actions but word's can also hurt more✧-✧-✧
ℂ𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝔽𝕝𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣𝕤