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12 May 2024, 16:22

Reducio

Victoria Lena Jones wrote: 12 May 2024, 16:16
Brookline Quinn wrote: 12 May 2024, 16:11
Victoria Lena Jones wrote: 12 May 2024, 16:05
Brookline Quinn wrote: 12 May 2024, 16:04
Victoria Lena Jones wrote: 12 May 2024, 16:02

The idea of the subject is good, but for this, you need to have a place date, hero names, then the beginning, meeting this group and connecting each other with this preface, and then you can determine the end according to the events.

Ok, some of that's in my prologue, but the rest I can fit in later!

What exactly is going on in the world? You want to do fantasy or something?

Its science fiction where a man with his "gang" (who's left) has to save the world who's girlfriend consumed by evil shadows and to save the world he gotta bring back the prophesied girl's memory. Its kinda like Raya and the last dragon and people turning to stone but other than that its pretty different

Hi Opal!!

Okay, then let's open up this World a little more. How long have those evil shadows been on Earth and why have they been on Earth? What exactly do shadows do to people? You said they came later, where is the prophecy said? Questions like these need to be answered

The shadows haven't been a problem for a while, just they've been waiting for the right place to start consuming people to a different place. Over a week or so before the prologue starts, the shadows have been consuming people more and more often. Maybe the prologue should be the first chapter and the beginning of the prophecy should be the prologue! , I knew there was things that needed kinked out. Thanks Tori!!!

brookline quinn | peter smith

is it female rage or am i just my father’s daughter?

Tracey Bailey

Second year, Ravenclaw

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12 May 2024, 16:22

[quote]Morning!

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Victoria Lena Jones

Third year, Ravenclaw

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12 May 2024, 16:24

Brookline Quinn wrote: 12 May 2024, 16:22
Reducio
Victoria Lena Jones wrote: 12 May 2024, 16:16
Brookline Quinn wrote: 12 May 2024, 16:11
Victoria Lena Jones wrote: 12 May 2024, 16:05
Brookline Quinn wrote: 12 May 2024, 16:04

What exactly is going on in the world? You want to do fantasy or something?

Its science fiction where a man with his "gang" (who's left) has to save the world who's girlfriend consumed by evil shadows and to save the world he gotta bring back the prophesied girl's memory. Its kinda like Raya and the last dragon and people turning to stone but other than that its pretty different

Hi Opal!!

Okay, then let's open up this World a little more. How long have those evil shadows been on Earth and why have they been on Earth? What exactly do shadows do to people? You said they came later, where is the prophecy said? Questions like these need to be answered

The shadows haven't been a problem for a while, just they've been waiting for the right place to start consuming people to a different place. Over a week or so before the prologue starts, the shadows have been consuming people more and more often. Maybe the prologue should be the first chapter and the beginning of the prophecy should be the prologue! , I knew there was things that needed kinked out. Thanks Tori!!!

I'm glad I could help.