Brilliant! Closed

Today is the day that kylie has been waiting for the most. After several months of receiving letters from Hogwarts, Kylie has often heard stories about Hogwarts from her father and mother.
now they are between platforms 9 and 10, even though Kylie has been told many times how to enter he still feels nervous. "Don't worry dear, you already know how. ' said his mother reassuringly.
behind them her sister, Gabrielle clasped her father's hand anxiously. "On the count of 3 ready?" her father gave instructions. "I'm ready"."1...2..3..." kylie half-ran, she gripped her trolley tight fast... now he made it to platform 9 ." Wow, this is so amazing". kylie saw the red carriage, she looked at it with a gleaming face.
"Take care of yourself okay?" "Okay, mom" "we'll be sending you letters often".
The whistle blew loudly, kylie hugged her father, mother, and Gabrielle. "bye mom, dad, gab .."
a moment later Gabrielle started crying "I will miss you kylie!".
Kylie stepped up to the Hogwarts express. The train started slowly. She looked for an empty compartment and sat in it,Kylie didn't dare to sit in the compartement that was already occupied even thoungh there was still room for her.She's too shy to say Hello

first year, gryffindor
Brilliant! Closed
kylie remembered her mother's message for lunch .She looked out the window and saw his family waving at him "don't forget to eat lunch!" Her mother reminded her one last time before finally disappearing from sight. after a few minutes of the train running kylie began to miss her father, mother and gabrielle. she felt lonely. but the scenery outside was so amazing that it made her forget for a moment her anxiety. kylie wished I was sorting into which dorm. "I think I'd be better off in Gryffindor”. She couldn't wait to get to hogwarst. imagining she’d learn to use spells and flying lessons which his father said was fun. Also stories about quidditch matches. She was busy daydreaming when suddenly there's a girl who opens the door of her compartment. looks like she's first year too, kylie thought. the girl asked if she could sit in her compartment. kylie was happy, she felt like she had friends now. “Hello goldie,im kylie stewart,no this seat is empty you can sit here.Goldie looked tensed but then she smiled and sat next to kylie "thank you". She started to get sleepy, but she forgot that she had a lot of candy to share. "hey..do you want some candy?"

first year, gryffindor