6 Jan 2021, 21:16
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No seriously that's good for a 5th grader! There's humor, dialogue, and has the potential to be something awesome!Eliza Corrids wrote: 6 Jan 2021, 20:25@Paisley Brown Lol the name xD Here's what my story was.
Reducio"Last night I wass bit by a dog. Not just any dog, but a big, hairy dog with rabies. At least, thats what I think it was. BWONK BWONK BWON~ "Honey! Time to get up! You gotta get to school! Ollies coming with you by the way!" "Yes mo~ AH!" I said, looking into the Mirror. There was a girl, just like me! Well, she was me, but with wolf ears. "I-I'm just dreaming! Yeah!"
The bus was crowded. Everyone was talking about the latest Fidget Spinners and Tofu, for some odd reason.
Later that day, I was sitting in class, bored, when all of a sudden I heard a really weird growling noise, and apparently the rest of the class did to. "Err what was that? Probably just my imagination" The teacher said. I looked around confused.
That's just the first few Paragraphs. I HATE it! Yours is so much better <*^*>
"Making a lark of the misery" - TS
6 Jan 2021, 21:42
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@Eliza Corrids Better than I ever could've done at fifth grade 
chill, it's only chaos
6 Jan 2021, 21:47
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Also , How are you guys in quidditch?! I swear that wasn't there a few minutes ago, and also, aren't first years not allowed to?
6 Jan 2021, 21:51
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You can apply to join the Quidditch team even as a first-year, here is the thread where you can sign up [Accio].Eliza Corrids wrote: 6 Jan 2021, 21:47 Also , How are you guys in quidditch?! I swear that wasn't there a few minutes ago, and also, aren't first years not allowed to?
Also, please don't post double posts until other players reply.
Stamina: 11 | Evasion: 10 | Strength: 10 | Wisdom: 5 | Arcane Power: 7 | Accuracy: 12
Fearless|Martial Artist|Evasive Maneuvers|Obnoxiously Strong
Fearless|Martial Artist|Evasive Maneuvers|Obnoxiously Strong