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Guys, I DUMPED every bit of sad emotion to my poems, can you guys look at them and tell me feedback?
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Just read them and I'm stunned! Personally love the first one more, cannot explain why though. I like how you can balance both rhymes/melody and literary imagery, without discarding one of them to focus on the other. The emotions are very interesting, I especially love the sort of quiet melancholy after realizing the cruelty and injustice/unfairness of the world, it's like I can feel the speaker's disappointment! Overall, it was really enjoyable to read (even thought they are darker topics) and PLEASE keep writing poems! Your doing great:DLennon Han wrote: 1 May 2026, 02:31 Guys, I DUMPED every bit of sad emotion to my poems, can you guys look at them and tell me feedback?
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Hi, Lennon! Just a small reminder to avoid double posting to avoid the scoldingLennon Han wrote: 1 May 2026, 02:31 Guys, I DUMPED every bit of sad emotion to my poems, can you guys look at them and tell me feedback?
Now, I loved the second one even more than the first! Where did you get that inspiration from??
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I got the inspiration form my feelings deep inside my heart!
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Guys I am super sorry for taking down my posts but I wanted to do a different theme. Why focus on dread when we could focus on thing about joy and things we can change?
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Hi! I know most of the writings in this clubs are poems (as for tortured poets) but can i also post essays? im really bad at writing poems, ngl 
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Hii!! Yup, don't worry!! Feel free to post here whatever you want, even if it's not a poemAurora Coleman wrote: 9 May 2026, 23:50 Hi! I know most of the writings in this clubs are poems (as for tortured poets) but can i also post essays? im really bad at writing poems, ngl
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hello dudes, dudethems, and dudettes 
just posted a poem i had written for class, I'm open to criticism and suggestions to improve :]
just posted a poem i had written for class, I'm open to criticism and suggestions to improve :]
"But magic is neither good nor evil. It is a tool, like a knife. Is a knife evil? Only if the wielder is evil."
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IT REMINDED ME SOSOSO MUCH OF ANIMAL FARM!!! YOU'RE VERY TALENTED!Cassandra Tarot wrote: 11 May 2026, 03:02 hello dudes, dudethems, and dudettes
just posted a poem i had written for class, I'm open to criticism and suggestions to improve :]
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