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But I don't know how
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How to go back to when we started
My Ency
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β€œThere’s always two sides to a story.”
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Maybe I built my walls too high
β€œWhat are you?
To define is to limit.” β€” Oscar Wilde
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for you to come inside...
β„³β„―π“π’Ύπ“ˆπ“ˆπ’Ά ℬ𝓁𝒢𝓀ℯ
"Just because you put a piece of smelly Camembert in a box doesn't stop it from smelling."
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But I don't know how to tear them down...
β€œWhat are you?
To define is to limit.” β€” Oscar Wilde
The Dark Cottage
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I tried many times...
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"Just because you put a piece of smelly Camembert in a box doesn't stop it from smelling."
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To break through the wall of discord, but

This is the stupidest song I've ever read till today, and I've read quite a lot, no offense guys, but our tones and rhythm are not matching. The lines are not rhyming as well. And why is there no Chorus? And did Verse 2 go on a holiday? I don't mean to accuse anyone or be rude, though.
Last edited by George Calder on 4 Apr 2026, 16:37, edited 1 time in total.
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you always Push me from a height.
End of verse 2
Prechorus.
Chorus.
Now I need the bridge, something short and snappy. 4 lines. I love the song, and I’m actually thinking of recording it
@George Calder I’m so sorry,I wrote verse 3 instead of 2, and as for the song, I feel like what’s special is that it’s an interactive effort, and I will add, subtract and rearrange some lyrics for the end result. This thread was just an example of how music connects people. Genuinely, I’m thanking you for posting some lines, but everyone else has tried their best too. I don’t want to come across as rude though.
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I thought we were perfect, I guess we weren’t
Last edited by Laurie Holmes on 5 Apr 2026, 08:41, edited 1 time in total.
My Ency
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β€œThere’s always two sides to a story.”
My Shop
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I knew every story would come to an end.
@Laurie Holmes I suppose you made a typo, it should be I thought instead of I though... correct me if I misunderstood <3 btw I like the lyrics we are writing~
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