OOC Let's Chat!

Makaio Kāne wrote: 6 Jan 2026, 00:58 Good morning class!

Is everyone ready for a wonderful day at Hogwarts?

Can I have 5 galleons -# not of milk #- before I enter class :palm_out:

Mr. Gunther. If I leave for the milk now I fear I might not come back.

Graci Laren wrote: 5 Jan 2026, 20:34 would anyone be willing to look at some unfinished backstory I wrote? here, if you do<3

wooooooowwwww this is sooooo well written!!!!!!!!!!!
i have a couple small notes, but theyre mainly minor grammatical things. mostly commas. BUT! the backstory itself is awesome and if/when you create this character, itll be so fascinating to read why her parents lefttttttttttttttttt (if that lore ever comes up hehe)

in the second 'tears from an owl: the hatchlings fall from grace' paragraph (like right next to the owl graphic right at the top. the summary one), there should probably not be a comma after 'simply a real one'
okay i was also pretty confused when you called her rhea for the first time. its an adorable nickname, but with the spelling of her actual name, i got a little mixed up. maybe put in parentheses next to her real name what the nickname is? or a sentence somewhere about the origin of the nickname?
in the sentence introducing the coromines for the first time, maybe try replacing the commas surrounding 'albeit rowdy' with these line thingys –
in the paragraph starting with the word england, try taking out the repeat of england after the word suffolk since the country has already been stated
in the sentence mentioning her fathers liking of defence against the dark arts, try removing the comma from in between 'rarely working' and 'in that respect'
in the first sentence of the 'tears of an owl: death of a raven' section', the first a in august should be capitalised
in that same sentence, there should not be a comma in between 'believed to be a dark spell' and 'or something undetectable....'

Makaio Kāne wrote: 6 Jan 2026, 01:01 Ms. Bliss I expect excellence

Ms. Gray you are very welcome for the reminder! Sounds like a fantastic time of education!

I guess that’s one way to think about it though this semester is packed full of competitions and events for me as well as two DC college classes.

hi professor i guess. ik youve never seen me ic but ive seen you around. also ive never done any transfiguration homework soooooo

Paris Soliel wrote: 6 Jan 2026, 01:14

Graci Laren wrote: 5 Jan 2026, 20:34 would anyone be willing to look at some unfinished backstory I wrote? here, if you do<3

wooooooowwwww this is sooooo well written!!!!!!!!!!!
i have a couple small notes, but theyre mainly minor grammatical things. mostly commas. BUT! the backstory itself is awesome and if/when you create this character, itll be so fascinating to read why her parents lefttttttttttttttttt (if that lore ever comes up hehe)

in the second 'tears from an owl: the hatchlings fall from grace' paragraph (like right next to the owl graphic right at the top. the summary one), there should probably not be a comma after 'simply a real one'
okay i was also pretty confused when you called her rhea for the first time. its an adorable nickname, but with the spelling of her actual name, i got a little mixed up. maybe put in parentheses next to her real name what the nickname is? or a sentence somewhere about the origin of the nickname?
in the sentence introducing the coromines for the first time, maybe try replacing the commas surrounding 'albeit rowdy' with these line thingys –
in the paragraph starting with the word england, try taking out the repeat of england after the word suffolk since the country has already been stated
in the sentence mentioning her fathers liking of defence against the dark arts, try removing the comma from in between 'rarely working' and 'in that respect'
in the first sentence of the 'tears of an owl: death of a raven' section', the first a in august should be capitalised
in that same sentence, there should not be a comma in between 'believed to be a dark spell' and 'or something undetectable....'

Thank you!! I didn't really think anyone would take the time to read it, so that means a lot.
My grammar has never been great, so that's actually really helpful! I do tend to over-use commas. Her nickname would be a little confusing now that I think about it^^

Right.

Time to write.

Graci Laren wrote: 6 Jan 2026, 01:18

Paris Soliel wrote: 6 Jan 2026, 01:14

Graci Laren wrote: 5 Jan 2026, 20:34 would anyone be willing to look at some unfinished backstory I wrote? here, if you do<3

wooooooowwwww this is sooooo well written!!!!!!!!!!!
i have a couple small notes, but theyre mainly minor grammatical things. mostly commas. BUT! the backstory itself is awesome and if/when you create this character, itll be so fascinating to read why her parents lefttttttttttttttttt (if that lore ever comes up hehe)

in the second 'tears from an owl: the hatchlings fall from grace' paragraph (like right next to the owl graphic right at the top. the summary one), there should probably not be a comma after 'simply a real one'
okay i was also pretty confused when you called her rhea for the first time. its an adorable nickname, but with the spelling of her actual name, i got a little mixed up. maybe put in parentheses next to her real name what the nickname is? or a sentence somewhere about the origin of the nickname?
in the sentence introducing the coromines for the first time, maybe try replacing the commas surrounding 'albeit rowdy' with these line thingys –
in the paragraph starting with the word england, try taking out the repeat of england after the word suffolk since the country has already been stated
in the sentence mentioning her fathers liking of defence against the dark arts, try removing the comma from in between 'rarely working' and 'in that respect'
in the first sentence of the 'tears of an owl: death of a raven' section', the first a in august should be capitalised
in that same sentence, there should not be a comma in between 'believed to be a dark spell' and 'or something undetectable....'

Thank you!! I didn't really think anyone would take the time to read it, so that means a lot.
My grammar has never been great, so that's actually really helpful! I do tend to over-use commas. Her nickname would be a little confusing now that I think about it^^

no problem, i LOVE editing!!! hehe so..... i actually have spammed the english errors/spelling mistakes thread with all my corrections several times. im sure all the staff hate me for it.
her nickname is cute, just a clarification might help, thats all!!

Morning everyone!!

Makaio Kāne wrote: 6 Jan 2026, 01:12 Mr. Gunther. If I leave for the milk now I fear I might not come back.

Does that mean a thirteen year old like me is a professional teacher if you leave in that case.. maybe I need some milk *insert mischievous music*