One line song
{Chorus} (I was thinking that this could be the chorus, for a change instead of Verse 1 as usual? Some songs start with choruses?)
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1} What else?
I also think we should include more rhyme
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1} What else?
I also think we should include more rhyme
One line song
{Chorus} (sure!)
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye
࣪ ִֶָ☾.The soul that sees beauty⋆.˚may sometimes walk alone ִ ࣪𖤐
--- Goethe✮
One line song
{Chorus}
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farwell, to us (to us)
I thought if we have something (in brackets) then maybe that could be the backup singers, holding the note for longer than this line? It might sound better
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farwell, to us (to us)
I thought if we have something (in brackets) then maybe that could be the backup singers, holding the note for longer than this line? It might sound better
One line song
{Chorus}
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
It will actually set better with the brackets, like the background music, yk.
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
It will actually set better with the brackets, like the background music, yk.
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You seem pretty sad For a girl so in love |
sta • 8 | eva • 6 | str • 5 | wis • 7 | arc • 5 | acc • 9 |
One line song
Chorus}
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2/ Chorus (in which case copy and paste)/ Pre-chorus/ Bridge}
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2/ Chorus (in which case copy and paste)/ Pre-chorus/ Bridge}
One line song
Chorus}
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2}
Standing on the rooftop, feelin' the cool wind,
Btw, just thought that it would sound good if we add a bit of music or notes in between the verses,
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2}
Standing on the rooftop, feelin' the cool wind,
Btw, just thought that it would sound good if we add a bit of music or notes in between the verses,
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You seem pretty sad For a girl so in love |
sta • 8 | eva • 6 | str • 5 | wis • 7 | arc • 5 | acc • 9 |
One line song
Chorus}
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
(first 3 line with only singer's voice, sudden background music in the 4th line)
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2}
Standing on the rooftop (↗), feelin' the cool wind (↘),
It's the only way(↝), not to feel the sinned (↘)
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
(first 3 line with only singer's voice, sudden background music in the 4th line)
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2}
Standing on the rooftop (↗), feelin' the cool wind (↘),
It's the only way(↝), not to feel the sinned (↘)
Reducio
trying something new here.. obviously we're not composer so we can't write a full music note. So I wrote notes in another color to make the song more specific? and I think using the arrows to point out the tone is a good idea (I just search up arrow copy&paste) Y'all can change them if you want?
࣪ ִֶָ☾.The soul that sees beauty⋆.˚may sometimes walk alone ִ ࣪𖤐
--- Goethe✮
One line song
Nice idea!
Reducio
{Chorus}
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
(first 3 line with only singer's voice, sudden background music in the 4th line)
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2}
Standing on the rooftop (↗), feelin' the cool wind (↘),
It's the only way(↝), not to feel the sinned (↘)
Oooh (↝)(↝)(↗) Feeling the cold wind, (↘)
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
(first 3 line with only singer's voice, sudden background music in the 4th line)
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2}
Standing on the rooftop (↗), feelin' the cool wind (↘),
It's the only way(↝), not to feel the sinned (↘)
Oooh (↝)(↝)(↗) Feeling the cold wind, (↘)
One line song
{Chorus}
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
(first 3 line with only singer's voice, sudden background music in the 4th line)
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2}
Standing on the rooftop (↗), feelin' the cool wind (↘),
It's the only way(↝), not to feel the sinned (↘)
Oooh (↝)(↝)(↗) Feeling the cold wind, (↘)
Hoping the silence will muffle the sound of the memories (↝)
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
(first 3 line with only singer's voice, sudden background music in the 4th line)
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2}
Standing on the rooftop (↗), feelin' the cool wind (↘),
It's the only way(↝), not to feel the sinned (↘)
Oooh (↝)(↝)(↗) Feeling the cold wind, (↘)
Hoping the silence will muffle the sound of the memories (↝)
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You seem pretty sad For a girl so in love |
sta • 8 | eva • 6 | str • 5 | wis • 7 | arc • 5 | acc • 9 |
One line song
{Chorus}
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
(first 3 line with only singer's voice, sudden background music in the 4th line)
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2}
Standing on the rooftop (↗), feelin' the cool wind (↘),
It's the only way(↝), not to feel the sinned (↘)
Oooh (↝)(↝)(↗) Feeling the cold wind, (↘)
Hoping the silence will muffle the sound of the memories (↝)
{Chorus}
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
(first 3 line with only singer's voice, sudden background music in the 4th line)
{verse 3}
Oh look at her eye, so shy, why can't I say hi (hi)
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
(first 3 line with only singer's voice, sudden background music in the 4th line)
{Verse 1}
Oh look at the sky, so high, sayin' goodbye (goodbye)
Waving farewell, to us (to us)
Look at the clouds, they are trying to cry (cry)
And the small stars, winking at night...
{Verse 2}
Standing on the rooftop (↗), feelin' the cool wind (↘),
It's the only way(↝), not to feel the sinned (↘)
Oooh (↝)(↝)(↗) Feeling the cold wind, (↘)
Hoping the silence will muffle the sound of the memories (↝)
{Chorus}
The star doesn't have voice but it speaks silently
We could hear, but we don't listen,
Because we only focus on the lovely and the ugly
Never look what's deep inside!!!
(first 3 line with only singer's voice, sudden background music in the 4th line)
{verse 3}
Oh look at her eye, so shy, why can't I say hi (hi)
Reducio
btw "her" is the stars if anyone's wondering why it looks like a love song now...
࣪ ִֶָ☾.The soul that sees beauty⋆.˚may sometimes walk alone ִ ࣪𖤐
--- Goethe✮