Songsmithing and Composition Club closed

Name of song: A Broken Heart
Song theme: Calm
How many verses: 3.
How many choruses: 3
Yes/no bridge: yes.
Other format/structure information:

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I thought we could do Chorus first, then Verse 1, then verse 2, then chorus, verse 3, bridge, and finish of with a chorus. That is unusual but sounds fun to make!
Also I thought the rhymes should be like this:

sentence..... ground
sentence....... sound
sentence....... fly
sentence .......... sky, etc, etc.

One or two lines we might include:

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The stars, sparkling in the sky
whispering to me below
a hope, a spark is the dark tunnel of the world.

Anything else about the song that we have to know: It won't be fast. It will be slow and melodious.

This is how we will make our song! It is a mix of all ideas. So, firstly can you submit the chorus (please make it to all the themes and structures and line rhymes as described above )

Club member Mentions:
@Emily Harris
@Vivi Grace
@Ellie Randensmith

Have fun!