Writing Criticism:

Nova Astron wrote: 17 Jun 2025, 18:20 Hey everyone! I wanted to see if I should make some edits on this RP response. I personally think it's great, but that's probably just my ego talking

I absolutely adore your writing style, it reads like a book in the best way possible. The characterization, the clear but descriptive writing…chefs kiss. This is definitely one to be proud of, and consider this thread one of my new favorites.

Also, I salute you for sneaking into Hogsmeade! Keep it up!

Hey guys! What do you guys think about this new solo I just wrote?

Avery Gray wrote: 17 Jun 2025, 22:45 Hey guys! What do you guys think about this new solo I just wrote?

Whaaa!!!! I love it!!! Avery and Mikey!!

I love it hehe it's so raw and emotional

Nyx Blackheart wrote: 17 Jun 2025, 18:50

Simon Poe wrote: 17 Jun 2025, 16:55

Nyx Blackheart wrote: 16 Jun 2025, 22:03 Hi! Can y'all give me some tips on this and if I should edit it? (my parts i mean):

Boop!

*blinks in utter shock* *gasps* *giggles* *eyes Nyx*
1: That is amazing!
2: is that romantic tension between Nyx and Mikey?
3: I have no words. Somebody give this hooman the best book award out there.

Yes for 2 hehe, definitely
Nyx thinks that Mikey is cute but she doesn't know is Mikey thinks she is cute

I'll subscribe to it so i know when more happens!

Ava Winchect wrote: 17 Jun 2025, 20:49

Nova Astron wrote: 17 Jun 2025, 18:20 Hey everyone! I wanted to see if I should make some edits on this RP response. I personally think it's great, but that's probably just my ego talking

I absolutely adore your writing style, it reads like a book in the best way possible. The characterization, the clear but descriptive writing…chefs kiss. This is definitely one to be proud of, and consider this thread one of my new favorites.

Also, I salute you for sneaking into Hogsmeade! Keep it up!

OMG thank you! That's probably the most sincere compliment I've been given on my writing

Hi everyone! English is not my first language and while I would definitely say my writing improved tons in the last couple of years, I would love to hear where I could improve still

This is my most recent thread: Belladonna

Opeila Winters wrote: 18 Jun 2025, 08:21 Hi everyone! English is not my first language and while I would definitely say my writing improved tons in the last couple of years, I would love to hear where I could improve still

This is my most recent thread: Belladonna

I was just reading this! I love it!

Can't believe I'm only just discovering this, but I'd love some reviews on Hikari's latest rp please

Hikari Fujimoto wrote: 18 Jun 2025, 18:11 Can't believe I'm only just discovering this, but I'd love some reviews on Hikari's latest rp please

I love it! It's really well written

Hikari Fujimoto wrote: 18 Jun 2025, 18:11 Can't believe I'm only just discovering this, but I'd love some reviews on Hikari's latest rp please

This is amazing, I have nothing other than that to say!