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I LOVE IT!
Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris to the Ground. Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris, ashes now.
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Letter's to Home, also known as The Singularly Most Annoying Part of My Week [solo]
Letter's to Home, also known as The Singularly Most Annoying Part of My Week [solo]
Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris to the Ground. Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris, ashes now.
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Phoenix Zhang
Writing Criticism:
Omg, I was reading this! I love it. Super powerful.Phoenix Zhang wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:00 I'll take any criticism on this post from a mass group thread
It's Totally Legitimate
Though, I would recommend making ur formatting to the left
Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris to the Ground. Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris, ashes now.
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Phoenix Zhang
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Oh I love this. Nyx gives such Wednesday vibesNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 13:06 What do y'all think about this?:
Letter's to Home, also known as The Singularly Most Annoying Part of My Week [solo]
Writing Criticism:
Lol, I know right? I wanted something like Cruella, Maleficent, and Wednesday had an evil baby hehePhoenix Zhang wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:08Oh I love this. Nyx gives such Wednesday vibesNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 13:06 What do y'all think about this?:
Letter's to Home, also known as The Singularly Most Annoying Part of My Week [solo]
Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris to the Ground. Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris, ashes now.
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Phoenix Zhang
Writing Criticism:
Definitely hit the markNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:09Lol, I know right? I wanted something like Cruella, Maleficent, and Wednesday had an evil baby hehePhoenix Zhang wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:08Oh I love this. Nyx gives such Wednesday vibesNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 13:06 What do y'all think about this?:
Letter's to Home, also known as The Singularly Most Annoying Part of My Week [solo]
Writing Criticism:
Lol, yeah but i love the way that you write, It reminds me of one of my fav authors, tho right now, i can't remember her name!Phoenix Zhang wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:09Definitely hit the markNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:09Lol, I know right? I wanted something like Cruella, Maleficent, and Wednesday had an evil baby hehePhoenix Zhang wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:08Oh I love this. Nyx gives such Wednesday vibesNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 13:06 What do y'all think about this?:
Letter's to Home, also known as The Singularly Most Annoying Part of My Week [solo]
Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris to the Ground. Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris, ashes now.
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Phoenix Zhang
Writing Criticism:
I actually have a short story I wrote if you'd like I can share it?Nyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:10Lol, yeah but i love the way that you write, It reminds me of one of my fav authors, tho right now, i can't remember her name!Phoenix Zhang wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:09Definitely hit the markNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:09Lol, I know right? I wanted something like Cruella, Maleficent, and Wednesday had an evil baby hehePhoenix Zhang wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:08Oh I love this. Nyx gives such Wednesday vibesNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 13:06 What do y'all think about this?:
Letter's to Home, also known as The Singularly Most Annoying Part of My Week [solo]
Writing Criticism:
YES PLEASE!Phoenix Zhang wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:22I actually have a short story I wrote if you'd like I can share it?Nyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:10Lol, yeah but i love the way that you write, It reminds me of one of my fav authors, tho right now, i can't remember her name!Phoenix Zhang wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:09Definitely hit the markNyx Blackheart wrote: 10 Jun 2025, 19:09Lol, I know right? I wanted something like Cruella, Maleficent, and Wednesday had an evil baby hehe
Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris to the Ground. Dance poor people, dance and drown, dance fair Paris, ashes now.
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