English errors and spelling mistakes

Vulnera Sanentur - Doesn’t include name or pronunciation. Just one.

Done - bounty given. Lear

It matters not what someone is born, but what they grow to be!

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This may have been intentional, but the price of this 5th year spell seemed awfully low compared to the others.

Yes, this is intentional because you need to own 2 other spells to own this one. It is simply a slightly better version of a spell that already exists. Admittedly, the cost could be higher but there is intended back ground re-ballancing that will make this cost make more sense. It should be as a sum still less than spells of the same year, but be beneficial in a unique way. The prices may adjust slightly when the final number comes out, but it will be significantly cheaper than other things taught that same year.

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Up to date (again)

There is something about ambition, how it not only propels you but also defines you.

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Okay I swear this is the last one. I don't need bounties as I have gotten plenty already, I'm just now invested in the grammar here.
sorry...

Blue Sparks Charm (Caerulimillious) YR2
A charm that precipitates a jet of blue sparks from the tip of the wand. When produced in large quantities, it was is difficult to see

Bluebell Flames (Caeruleus Inflamarae) YR2
Also known as "Cold Fire," this charm creates magical blue flames that are waterproof and can be touched, penetrated

Fire-Making Spell (Incendio Duo) YR2
PREREQUISITE: INCENDIO & YEAR 2. A charm that conjures green flames. It was is a stronger variation of the Fire-Making Spell, but not as strong as Incendio Tria.

Ducklifors Jinx (Ducklifors) YR4
A transfiguration jinx that transformed transforms a target into a duck.

Pressurized Water Charm (Aqua Eructo) YR4
“PREREQUISITE” was misspelled as “PREREQUISTE”.
Also, A charm that could can be used to

Fairy Cake to Fairy (Faerifors) YR6
A transformation spell that turns a fairy cakes into...
cake should be singular

Fianto Duri (Fianto Duri) YR6
...such as Protego Maxima could can enhance...

Flipendo Maxima (Flipendo Maxima) YR6
...which throws the target back further and with greater force that than the original spell... just spelling

Fulgari (Fulgari) YR6
luminous cords that binds an opponent's arms.
subject verb agreement, should be bind, singular

Bounty still given - Lear

Avis Marlong | ”She won't cry or beg for help...she'll isolate from the world and fight her own demons so that nobody can throw it in her face later.”
"The odds of hitting your target increase dramatically when you aim at it." Benji Marecos

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Cracker Jinx (Y3)
Prerequisite writing inconsistency: other prerequisites are written as 'PREREQUISITE: YEAR 3' while this one is written as 'PREREQUISITE: THIRD YEAR'

Flipendo Maxima (Y6)
This is not a spelling mistake, but.. just wanna make sure: no prerequisite in the description. We don't need the basic Flipendo as a prerequisite?

I had a list to add prerequisites, this was on the list. I had not gotten to it yet, you are correct. Still giving you the coin for it. - Lear

"Be the main character of your own life."
Sere Nade | Jason Aguilar

English errors and spelling mistakes
"Drowsiness Draught
A potion that induces fatigue, drowsiness and and tiredness in the drinker."

and is repeated <3

"Restoration Potion
A potion that undoes the effects of a other spells and potions."

i believe "a" shouldn't be here :)

Updated, bounty given
Last edited by Adeline Spinks on 21 May 2025, 01:54, edited 2 times in total.

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There should be a comma after "ingested".
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"A potion that creates a poisonous cloud...."
Done, bounty given
Last edited by Axyen Dragonclaw on 21 May 2025, 01:59, edited 1 time in total.

Stamina-8|Evasion-10|Strength-2|Wisdom-9|Arcane Power-20|Accuracy-8
* A Hufflepuff student. He seems to be trying to prove something.

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Ok so this might be more like pet-peeve but Image posted by the member After fumes there should either be a comma or say will. once again might just be a pet-peeve

Done, Bounty given

✧-✧-✧They say that words are stronger
than actions but word's can also hurt more✧-✧-✧
ℂ𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝔽𝕝𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣𝕤

English errors and spelling mistakes
Amortentia:

The current descriptions reads:
A potion that gives the drinker a sense of infatuation often misperceived as "love" towards a specific person.
Unless this is an update to the intended effect, Amortentia causes infatuation not towards a specific person, but rather the first person encountered upon drinking it.

The descriptor is not supposed to replace the more specific, detailed information regarding the potions/spells, but does not hurt to add/clarify. Bounty given, edit done.

ᴏᴛʜᴇʀ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀꜱ: Owen Lochridge | Margarethe Fransson | Dottie Dunlot [comc professor]

English errors and spelling mistakes
Antidote to Common Potions

Should be Antidote to Common Poisons

Edited, bounty given.

ᴏᴛʜᴇʀ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀꜱ: Owen Lochridge | Margarethe Fransson | Dottie Dunlot [comc professor]