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English errors and spelling mistakes

Amplifying charm - YR4 - should say can be used, not could
Human to Yak YR7 - has an unnecessary "a" before transforms.
Oppugno Jinx (Oppugno) YR7 Should be attacks a target not an target

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English errors and spelling mistakes
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Extra space right before closing parenthes needs deleted.

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Same as above. Extra space needs deleted.

Those were there on purpose due to image issues, I repaired the image issue this morning. But compensated all the same. - Lear
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Spell's name is Piertotum Locomotor.

In the description, it should read "can be controlled" rather than "could be controlled".

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English errors and spelling mistakes
Hiding Spell (Cave inimicum) YR6 Those on the other side of the shield are not be able to see, hear, or smell them. Should say are not able to
Wind Jinx Duo (Ventus Duo) YR6 - contains a double "the"

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Avis Marlong | ”She won't cry or beg for help...she'll isolate from the world and fight her own demons so that nobody can throw it in her face later.”
"The odds of hitting your target increase dramatically when you aim at it." Benji Marecos

English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Should read: "this spell is effective" rather than "was effective".

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Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:31, edited 1 time in total.
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English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Should read: "This spell causes" rather than "would cause".

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Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:31, edited 1 time in total.
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English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Should read: "can be vanquished" rather than "could be vanquished".

Not sure if the parenthesis can be fixed.

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Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:31, edited 1 time in total.
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Rigel McCoire

English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Dangling parenthesis.

On purpose, yadda yadda. Had to get it fixed this morning. Bounty given - Lear
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English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Should read: "that can disintegrate" rather than "could disintegrate".

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Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:31, edited 1 time in total.
Keep your mind in hell; and don't despair.
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Rigel McCoire

English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Should read: "can be used" rather than "could be used".

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Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:31, edited 1 time in total.
Keep your mind in hell; and don't despair.
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