English errors and spelling mistakes

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The atmospheric charm should say conditions, plural, instead of conditions. YR2

Blindfolding Spell Yr2, Should say spell, singular, instead of spells Y2

Bounty given, edits made.
Last edited by Avis Marlong on 18 May 2025, 04:38, edited 2 times in total.

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English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Should read "A charm that allows" rather than "a charm that allowed".

Edit done, bounty given. - Lear
Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:32, edited 1 time in total.

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English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Should read "caster points at" rather than "pointed".

Edit made, bounty given - Lear
Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:32, edited 1 time in total.

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Rigel McCoire

English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Should read "A charm that returns or reverts" rather than "could return or revert".

Edit made, bounty given. Lear
Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:32, edited 1 time in total.

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Rigel McCoire

English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Should read "is a Dark charm that can be used" rather than "was / could".

Edit made, bounty given. Lear
Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:32, edited 1 time in total.

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Rigel McCoire

English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Should read "makes" rather than "made".

Not sure if the parenthesis can be fixed or not.

The parenthesis is because of an image error we have been having. Been working on it, so someday. But the other edit has been made, bounty given. - Lear.
Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:32, edited 1 time in total.

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English errors and spelling mistakes
(Some may be the same as above, if so please just ignore)
Seventh Year - cat to tea cosy - Transfiguration spell that could be used to transform a cat or kneazle into a tea cosy.

Seventh Year - repelling charm is repeated.

Six Year - Candle Conjuration spell - missing a full stop

Fifth year - Glacius Duo - A charm used offensively to freeze a target enemy in ice. It was (is) a more powerful version of Glacius, but was (is) not as powerful as Glacius Tria

Third year - jelly Brain jinx - A jinx that reduced (reduces) one's mental abilities.

Third year - summoning charm - missing “A” at the beginning

Second year - illegibility charm - A charm that made (makes) writing impossible to read.

Bounty given. I made the edits, but did not edit them exactly as suggested to align with some other work I am doing. - Lear

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English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Extra space after Colloshoo and before close parenthesis.

Unfortunately this one is because of an image error, I have to add the space to get the image to reset otherwise you were getting images of chocolate frog cards. I have to wait for the site to refresh before these can be fixed. - Lear
Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:32, edited 1 time in total.

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Rigel McCoire

English errors and spelling mistakes
So I have a couple more. . .

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This one should say ‘that is used’ rather than ‘can be used’

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This one should say ‘a charm that can release’ instead of ‘which could’

Edits made, they look slightly different than suggested. Bounty given. - Lear
Last edited by Avery Gray on 18 May 2025, 04:32, edited 2 times in total.

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English errors and spelling mistakes
Year 7

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Should read "that can be used" rather than "could be used".

Bounty given - Lear
Last edited by Colin McCoire on 18 May 2025, 14:33, edited 1 time in total.

Keep your mind in hell; and don't despair.
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Rigel McCoire