To Mr E.S. Errand Finished

Dear Ed,
Is the Gryffindor common room still comfortable? I feel quite anxious about your exhausted face this morning.
Um, actually, did my last note let you feel uptight? I’m fine now and do not worry about me. It’s just the first time of my homework. I’m sure I’ll have plenty of chances to do better!
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OK, let’s talk something cheerful now. I’ve found a great friend. Her name’s Lizzie Callaghan. Have you heard of her last name? Or, to be more frank, do you know her brother?
Lizzie’s a Gryffindor and so was her elder brother. He’s fourteen, like you. But maybe he’s in the fourth year——Lizzie said she could not remember it clearly. You haven’t told me much of your friends so I’m wondering if you know this boy? You know, Lizzie and I both agreed that if we too are friends and our brothers are friends would be a really interesting thing!
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How’s Enjy these days? Combeferre replied me as “well and stuck in Quidditch”. But I really think this Ferre is just kidding. Tell me about our eldest cousin tomorrow when we meet, alright?
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Ah, I’ve written such a long letter! But, keep smiling and shining, Edmund, and be satisfied with what you had. Do remember, that we are already very luck for our magic power, and we have to be grateful for it.
Cheer up!

Your sister,
Lynn

Word Count: 237
Errand Progress: 2/5