My character has black hair, black eyes, a handsome face, olive skin colour, a sharp jaw and a very good-looking nose. He was very charming, and many people adored him.

My character kept to himself and within his inner circle of friends in his neighbourhood. he didn't involve himself in drama or problems. He was helpful when you were in trouble, but if you did something bad to him, he would make sure to do something worse to you.

My character had only a single father as his mother died when he was 5 during a failed experiment. Other richer families ridiculed his father for being broke, but he always tried to get the best things for Benjamin. At school (Hogwarts), he befriended some kids, forming a little group with 7 of his classmates. Upon entering Benjamin was very shocked by the beauty of the castle. He didnt want to get in trouble and wanted to make his father proud so he decided to study alot.

When he was eight, he argued with his brother, and he got angry. This caused the chair that his brother was sitting on to move backwards, making him fall on the ground. His brother thought it was him and threw his potatoes at him

Is this good enough I fixed what was wrong