is this right?
he has brown eyes long black hair down her shoulder and small flat nose. And shiny white teeth.Is not very tall compared to people her age she is a bit cute

Kind to others loyal to friends good at keeping secrets. Great at quidditch because she has practised before. Very funny sometimes and amuses her friends with her jokes. Not very good at studying but likes magic. Likes animals but not scary ones she has a dog and a cat at home.She is scared of spiders and big insects or scary animals
She is pureblood with wizard parents.But she has lots of wizard friends.They were not rich they were just a normal family and she has a eight year old ittle sister she is very kind to her little sister.
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first time she had an accidental underaged wandless magic was when she was nine. She just had an argument with her big sister. She was very angry. She was staring at the window shaking with anger. Then suddenly the window started cracking and splinter of glass fell down to the florr and the whole window broke. She was shocked for a while but realised happily that she was doing magic. Although she already expected this so she was happy about it but she was a bit unhappy that the window broke.