Hello Validator! I have made the changes asked, and though the circumstances of my backstory are still quite similar, they now should make sense and have context. Some of these stories such as the parents' scandal will be elaborated on in the rp, but I think this should give enough information that there's something to talk about. I hope this works! If not, I will be glad to change anything else amiss.

Physical Description: Marilda Syngonium is a tall, brown-haired girl with enchanting grey eyes and long legs. She has perfectly-fitting robes and is always dressed according to the occasion. Marilda also has long fingers and played the piano when she lived at home.

Mental Description: Marilda is open-minded but always tries to be optimistic. Her friends describe her as funny and clever, but she knows that she has a dark side hidden somewhere. Marilda controlls this, and appears to be happy, smart, and funny at all times.

Biography: Marilda has a loving and caring family that consists of a mother and father, and a younger sister. Her family has 2 dogs, and she is a pure-blood, though her parents left life in a Wizarding town many years ago due to a scandal they would prefer was forgotten. They live in a small house in Berwick-Upon-Tweed, and the only neighbors are a mile away. The neighbors are Muggles, yet very good friends of the family, and the daughter was accepted to Hogwarts many years ago. The neighbors are an elderly couple and their daughter now is in Iceland studying magical herbs and fungi. Marilda was given a broomstick by her Wizard uncle when she was 9 (much to the chagrin of her parents) and can now fly quite well... though her parents prefer she wasn't seen.

First Instance of Magic: Marilda's first instance of magic was when she accidentally fell out of a tree and simply floated 20 yards, carried by the wind, before landing safely in a field. She grew up with magic being done only in and around the house, such as her parents cooking with magic, and gnomes in a nearby field.